MEETHEY BOL (Ghazal).... "Mohan"

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MEETHEY BOL (This is Hindi/Urdu version of Punjabi ghazal Mithey Bol)

Tujhe to kehtey hain anmol merii zindagi
Phir kyun phire daanwadol merii zindagi

Kahin pe giddah dekh bhangrhaa naach le
Kahin pe baj rahey hain dhol merii zindagi

Anmol kaa matlab to tu samajhti hee hogi
Uthh apne dil ke dar tu khol merii zindagi

Baahir dekh kaun hai aaj milan ko aayaa
Bithaa le issey abb dil ke kol merii zindagi

Meethhi meethhi baat tu kar le iss ke sang
Har pal tu aaj banaa le anmol merii zindagi

Abb band naa rahe terey dil kee koi khirhki
Sunaa de dil mein bajtey dhol merii zindagi

Aaj kuchh naa chupanaa sab saaf bataanaa
Isske bol bhi hain shirin se bol merii zindagi

MohaN abb tumh hanste baste hee rehnaa
Karvey vachan kabhi naa bol merii zindagi

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Daanwadol = shaky;  Kol = paas
Karvey Vachan = bitter words; ugly talk;
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MEETHEY BOL (This is Hindi/Urdu version of Punjabi ghazal Mithey Bol)

Tujhe to kehtey hain anmol merii zindagi
Phir kyun phire daanwadol merii zindagi

Kahin pe giddah dekh bhangrhaa naach le
Kahin pe baj rahey hain dhol merii zindagi

Anmol kaa matlab to tu samajhti hee hogi
Uthh apne dil ke dar tu khol merii zindagi

Baahir dekh kaun hai aaj milan ko aayaa
Bithaa le issey abb dil ke kol merii zindagi

Meethhi meethhi baat tu kar le iss ke sang
Har pal tu aaj banaa le anmol merii zindagi

Abb band naa rahe terey dil kee koi khirhki
Sunaa de dil mein bajtey dhol merii zindagi

Aaj kuchh naa chupanaa sab saaf bataanaa
Isske bol bhi hain shirin se bol merii zindagi

MohaN abb tumh hanste baste hee rehnaa
Karvey vachan kabhi naa bol merii zindagi

Surindar. N                      "MohaN"

Daanwadol = shaky;  Kol = paas
Karvey Vachan = bitter words; ugly talk;

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MEETHEY BOL (This is Hindi/Urdu version of Punjabi ghazal Mithey Bol)

Tujhe to kehtey hain anmol merii zindagi
Phir kyun phire daanwadol merii zindagi

Kahin pe giddah dekh bhangrhaa naach le
Kahin pe baj rahey hain dhol merii zindagi

Anmol kaa matlab to tu samajhti hee hogi
Uthh apne dil ke dar tu khol merii zindagi

Baahir dekh kaun hai aaj milan ko aayaa
Bithaa le issey abb dil ke kol merii zindagi

Meethhi meethhi baat tu kar le iss ke sang
Har pal tu aaj banaa le anmol merii zindagi

Abb band naa rahe terey dil kee koi khirhki
Sunaa de dil mein bajtey dhol merii zindagi

Aaj kuchh naa chupanaa sab saaf bataanaa
Isske bol bhi hain shirin se bol merii zindagi

MohaN abb tumh hanste baste hee rehnaa
Karvey vachan kabhi naa bol merii zindagi

Surindar. N                      "MohaN"

Daanwadol = shaky;  Kol = paas
Karvey Vachan = bitter words; ugly talk;


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waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Surindar ji, kyaa khoob likhaa hai aapne, ek dum zabardassstttt, mazaa aa gayaa padh ke....!!!!
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Quote from: surindarn on June 11, 2016, 03:17:05 PM
MEETHEY BOL (This is Hindi/Urdu version of Punjabi ghazal Mithey Bol)

Tujhe to kehtey hain anmol merii zindagi
Phir kyun phire daanwadol merii zindagi

Kahin pe giddah dekh bhangrhaa naach le
Kahin pe baj rahey hain dhol merii zindagi

Anmol kaa matlab to tu samajhti hee hogi
Uthh apne dil ke dar tu khol merii zindagi

Baahir dekh kaun hai aaj milan ko aayaa
Bithaa le issey abb dil ke kol merii zindagi

Meethhi meethhi baat tu kar le iss ke sang
Har pal tu aaj banaa le anmol merii zindagi

Abb band naa rahe terey dil kee koi khirhki
Sunaa de dil mein bajtey dhol merii zindagi

Aaj kuchh naa chupanaa sab saaf bataanaa
Isske bol bhi hain shirin se bol merii zindagi

MohaN abb tumh hanste baste hee rehnaa
Karvey vachan kabhi naa bol merii zindagi

Surindar. N                      "MohaN"

Daanwadol = shaky;  Kol = paas
Karvey Vachan = bitter words; ugly talk;



nice composition,sir
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waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Surindar ji, kyaa khoob likhaa hai aapne, ek dum zabardassstttt, mazaa aa gayaa padh ke....!!!!
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bahut khoob surindarn ji
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nice composition,sir
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very nice sir, punjabi wale pe bhi padha tha, bahot khoob!
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