mere hamsafar mere saath chal.........ufaq.

by ufaq on May 06, 2012, 05:01:19 PM
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dosto main aap sab ka tahedil se shukrguzaar hu ki aapne meri pahli ghazal ko pasand kiya.aik baar phir se aap sab ke saamne haazir hu aik aur koshish ke saath. meri aap sab se guzaarish hai ki aapko meri ghazal main agar kahi bhi koi kami ya galti dikhaai de to behichaq bataaye.........behr hai - 11212/11212/11212/11212  (kamil musamman salim)

                                    GHAZAL

mere hamsafar mere saath chal,mujhe raasto ka pataa nahi.
kahi kho na jaaun main bheed men,mera haath yu to chudaa nahi.

ha tufaani raat bhi gam bhari wo chamak-garaj ke chali gayi,
nahi barq haay giri nahi, nahi abr haay fataa nahi.

meri beqasi ka saboot hai ye tarah-tarah ki udaasiya,
ye zamee bhi haay fatee nahi,ye falaq bhi haay giraa nahi.

mere haale dil pe tu has to le ki ye soch le ye samajh bhi le,
koi aisa bhi hai jahaan men jise dukh kabhi bhi huyaa nahi.

kadee dhoop men ki sane huye wo hawaa ke jhonke bhi garm the,
yu shajar ki chhaon ghani to thee mujhe chain phir bhi milaa nahi.

yahee raat-din ki shikaayte hame is safar men bani rahi,
mere saath kyun tu rukaa nahi,tere saath kyun main chalaa nahi.

kafe dast jaan liye ufaq yu hi besabab to fire kahaan,
jise zindagi se na pyaar ho wo qazaase phir ki daraa nahi.


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«Reply #1 on: May 06, 2012, 05:48:05 PM »
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dosto main aap sab ka tahedil se shukrguzaar hu ki aapne meri pahli ghazal ko pasand kiya.aik baar phir se aap sab ke saamne haazir hu aik aur koshish ke saath. meri aap sab se guzaarish hai ki aapko meri ghazal main agar kahi bhi koi kami ya galti dikhaai de to behichaq bataaye.........behr hai - 11212/11212/11212/11212  (kamil musamman salim)

                                    GHAZAL

mere hamsafar mere saath chal,mujhe raasto ka pataa nahi.
kahi kho na jaaun main bheed men,mera haath yu to chudaa nahi.

ha tufaani raat bhi gam bhari wo chamak-garaj ke chali gayi,
nahi barq haay giri nahi, nahi abr haay fataa nahi.

meri beqasi ka saboot hai ye tarah-tarah ki udaasiya,
ye zamee bhi haay fatee nahi,ye falaq bhi haay giraa nahi.

mere haale dil pe tu has to le ki ye soch le ye samajh bhi le,
koi aisa bhi hai jahaan men jise dukh kabhi bhi huyaa nahi.

kadee dhoop men ki sane huye wo hawaa ke jhonke bhi garm the,
yu shajar ki chhaon ghani to thee mujhe chain phir bhi milaa nahi.

yahee raat-din ki shikaayte hame is safar men bani rahi,
mere saath kyun tu rukaa nahi,tere saath kyun main chalaa nahi.

kafe dast jaan liye ufaq yu hi besabab to fire kahaan,
jise zindagi se na pyaar ho wo qazaase phir ki daraa nahi.




ufaq sahab bahut pyaari ghazal hai. rahi bahr ki baat to kuch gadbad hui to, saiji sahab, hasan sahab, satish sahab waghaira hai bataa sakte hain.


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«Reply #2 on: May 06, 2012, 07:37:36 PM »
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Thank you ufaqj!
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«Reply #4 on: May 07, 2012, 03:55:37 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: May 07, 2012, 04:02:31 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: May 07, 2012, 06:55:58 PM »
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Ufaq Sahaab Aadaab!


Behad khoob aur umdaa gazal kahi hai janab... Usual Smile
Masha Allaah behad umdaa ahsaas O khayaal aur
khoob ashaaroN meiN dhaala hai aapne... Usual Smile

Hume bher ka toH pata nahi par aapki kalaam
ki rawaani khud kah rahi hai ke aapki kalaam
bher meiN hai... Usual Smile

Is khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam par humaari
dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye.... aur bazm meiN aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda hafez.. Usual Smile                   

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