Mizaz-e-basar

by saaz_haldwanvi on May 06, 2009, 12:12:13 PM
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Woh apne dil ki karta raha
Kahne wala bas kahta raha,

Woh mashware baham karte rahe    [baham - aapas main]
Aawaam musalsal jalta raha,

Natvani hai roti uski            [natvani - kamjori,majboori] 
Woh dekhta raha sahta raha

Is baras vaadon ke mausam mein
Shahar bhar dhu_an ud_ta raha,

[Ta-umr dono apni zid ke sath rahe]
[Ek kahta raha duja sunta raha,]

Baad mere meri achhaiyon ka
Kissa der tak chalta raha,

Do pal chain ki khatir bashar
Tamam umr bad-hawas bhagta raha,


Jindgi ka haNsil kya ho'saaz'
ki main to bas yuN hi jita raha,

                               'saaz haldwanvi'written on 21 jan 00
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«Reply #1 on: May 06, 2009, 12:26:46 PM »
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Woh apne dil ki karta raha
Kahne wala bas kahta raha,

Woh mashware baham karte rahe    [baham - aapas main]
Aawaam musalsal jalta raha,

Natvani hai roti uski            [natvani - kamjori,majboori] 
Woh dekhta raha sahta raha

Is baras vaadon ke mausam mein
Shahar bhar dhu_an ud_ta raha,

Ta-umr dono apni zid ke sath rahe
Ek kahta raha duja sunta raha,

Baad mere meri achhaiyon ka
Kissa der tak chalta raha,

Do pal chain ki khatir bashar
Tamam umr bad-hawas bhagta raha,

Jindgi ka haasil kya ho"saaz"
Main to bas yu hi gujarta raha
                               'saaz haldwanvi'written on 21 jan 00


Bahut Khoob Saaj Ji,

Zindagi ki sachayi ko parbashit kiya hai aapki lines ne,
 
 Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley
Umda Work...

Shally.
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«Reply #2 on: May 06, 2009, 02:31:54 PM »
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bahoot khoob Saaz ji.. Keep writing...
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«Reply #3 on: June 15, 2009, 12:26:21 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Saaj Ji,

Zindagi ki sachayi ko parbashit kiya hai aapki lines ne,
 
 Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley
Umda Work...honsla afjayi k liye shukriya shael

Shally.

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«Reply #4 on: June 15, 2009, 01:28:03 PM »
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lajawaab qalaam Saaz ji
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«Reply #5 on: June 26, 2009, 10:42:03 AM »
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lajawaab qalaam Saaz ji
shukriya shab ji
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«Reply #6 on: June 26, 2009, 10:50:40 AM »
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Wah wah Saaz ji,very nice and beautiful creation. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: June 28, 2009, 10:27:11 AM »
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Wah wah Saaz ji,very nice and beautiful creation. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
jarre-nawaji ka shukriya madhu ji
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