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<>*Mujhse meri saadgi mange…*<>

Tujhse kuch pal sukun ki apni zindagi maange
Ee khuda ye adna insaan tujhse teri bandagee maange

Bht dekh liye maine yahan ishq mahobbat ka afsaane
Ab ye tujhse bas thodisi gairon k liye khushi mange

Zaalimon ne kahin ka nahin chhoda hai mere watan ko
Tujhse ye ab unke liye thodi si sadbuddhhi maange

Kar de ataa tu mujhe bas ab itni ruuh ki paakizgi
Behta paani bhi mujhe dekhe to mujhse meri saadgi mange…


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Re: <>*Mujhse meri saadgi mange…*<>

«Reply #1 on: September 03, 2010, 04:22:55 PM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 03, 2010, 02:52:13 PM

"Behta Paani Bhi Mujhe Dekhe To Mujhse Meri Saadgi Maange"

Bahut bahut Khoob Anuji..bahut Hi khoobsurat Kalaam


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«Reply #2 on: September 03, 2010, 04:35:21 PM »

bahoot bahoot Khoob Anamika ji... Kya baat hai Bahoot Khoob!


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«Reply #3 on: September 03, 2010, 04:56:09 PM »

Kasak Jee Aadaab!

Kia baat hai...... bahut achchi koshish rahi aapki
Sabhi sher per dil se daad.....

Bahut achcha likha hai aap ne behad achchi aur kareeb kareeb ekdum sahiN koshish rahi hai jee daad......

Aise hi likhate rahiye.....
Khush rahiye......
Khuda Hafez........


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«Reply #4 on: September 03, 2010, 11:03:46 PM »

Kask Kamal Dmmaal .......

Bhut hi khoob ............

Kya baat hai .......bhut gehri utar gaye aap to


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«Reply #5 on: September 04, 2010, 03:18:25 AM »

"Behta pani bhi mujhe dekhe toh mujse meri saadgi mange"
Bahaut khoob di..!
Yeh akhri line toh maine baar baar padi aur har baar wah wahi ki hai!
Applause


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«Reply #6 on: September 04, 2010, 06:51:07 AM »

hmm..kuchh kahun se achha hoga kuchh likhun~

sher sher tukdo me mila to shayari ban gayi
ek ek boond milkar tere ishq ki meri zindagi ban gayi
me akela khada tha ashiqon se bhari mehfil me 'Abhi'
tum aakar mile to meri bhi Aashiqui ban gayi~


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Re: <>*Mujhse meri saadgi mange…*<>

«Reply #7 on: September 04, 2010, 06:59:21 AM »

Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on September 04, 2010, 06:51:07 AM

oyee hoyeee ki kahne aapke abhi ji.....

shabd shabd jod k ek kahani ban gai
dua dil se jo nikli to rubaai ban gai
tumne likha jo kuch mujhe dekhkar
meri duniya me nai pehchaan ban gai....


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«Reply #8 on: September 04, 2010, 07:08:34 AM »

apko pasand aayi iska shukriya anuji...nice reply~


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«Reply #9 on: September 04, 2010, 09:22:44 AM »

minblowing kasak........
n lovely reply abhi ji...


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Re: <>*Mujhse meri saadgi mange…*<>

«Reply #10 on: September 04, 2010, 10:29:50 PM »

bahut bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai ye aapki... bahut umda likha hai aaapne... shabd nahi mile mujhe iski taarif ke liye... aur aakhri line to bas ..superb...

apno ke liye maine to sab kuch gawaya,
mere apne ab wafaa ki nishaani maange,

kaise khoyi hai maine apni zindagi,
wo ab mere dard ki kahaani maange...


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