Musafir Hai Tu Ehh Bande Chalte Rehna Tera Naseeb "Khwahish"

by khwaish on October 22, 2013, 05:06:41 PM
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ManziloN Ka Gham Karne Se Manzil To Nahi Miltee
Hausle Bhi Tooth Jaate HaiN Aksar Udaas Rehne Se


Kashtiyaan Bhawar meN Aakar Bhi Kabhi Doobtee Nahi
Kuch Chandd UmeedeN Hai Jo Kabhi Toothtee Nahi

Muflisi Ke Daur MeN Aakhir Kya Khareedoge Bazaar Se
Ghar Laut Chalo,Kya KhwahisheN AankhoN Ko Chubtee Nahi

Kabhi Apni Be-Basi Par Ghar Ke Dar-o-Deewar Ro Dete haiN
Par Umeed Ki Shama  Jaltee Rahi, Woh Kabhi Bujhtee Nahi

Pucha Ek Sache Fakeer Se, Khush Rehne Ka Saleeqa Kya Hai
Bin Maa-Baap Ke DuayoN Ke,Koi Raah Zindagi MeN Sujhtee Nahi

Musafir Hai Tu  Ehh Bande, Chalte Rehna Tera Naseeb..!!
Manzil Kabhi Khud Aakar Tere KadmoN Ko To Chumtee Nahi

"Khwahish" Dhoop-Chaau, Dard-Hassi Hissa Hai Zindagi Ka.!!
Par Khuda Saath Ho To Taqdeer Bhi Kabhi Tujh se Roothtee Nahi


                ~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: October 22, 2013, 05:11:27 PM »
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Very Very Good Khwahish Jee!!!

Yeh do ashaar mujhe behad pasand aaye. How true these lines are...

Pucha Ek Sache Fakeer Se, Khush Rehne Ka Saleeqa Kya Hai
Bin Maa-Baap Ke DuayoN Ke,Koi Raah Zindagi MeN Sujhtee Nahi

Musafir Hai Tu  Ehh Bande, Chalte Rehna Tera Naseeb..!!
Manzil Kabhi Khud Aakar Tere KadmoN Ko To Chumtee Nahi


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«Reply #2 on: October 22, 2013, 05:16:07 PM »
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Musafir Hai Tu Ehh Bande, Chalte Rehna Tera Naseeb..!!
Manzil Kabhi Khud Aakar Tere KadmoN Ko To Chumtee
Nahi

"Khwahish" Dhoop-Chaau, Dard-Hassi Hissa Hai Zindagi
Ka.!!
Par Khuda Saath Ho To Taqdeer Bhi Kabhi Tujh se
Roothtee Nahi

Bahut Khub Bhai Khwaish Applause


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

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«Reply #3 on: October 22, 2013, 05:17:32 PM »
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bahut khoob dher saaree daad
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«Reply #4 on: October 22, 2013, 05:20:18 PM »
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Muflisi Ke Daur MeN Aakhir Kya Khareedoge Bazaar Se
Ghar Laut Chalo,Kya KhwahisheN AankhoN Ko Chubtee Nahi

 is sher ki jitni tareef karuN wo kam hai Khwahish sahab... waahh

Musafir Hai Tu  Ehh Bande, Chalte Rehna Tera Naseeb..!!
Manzil Kabhi Khud Aakar Tere KadmoN Ko To Chumtee Nahi


aur is sher ko ghazal ki jaan kahungee.. kyaa andaaz hai.. bahot khoob... daad o mubaarakbaad... likhte rahen..

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«Reply #5 on: October 22, 2013, 06:11:55 PM »
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bahot khooob...
Pucha Ek Sache Fakeer Se, Khush Rehne Ka Saleeqa Kya Hai
Bin Maa-Baap Ke DuayoN Ke,Koi Raah Zindagi MeN Sujhtee Nahi

Musafir Hai Tu  Ehh Bande, Chalte Rehna Tera Naseeb..!!
Manzil Kabhi Khud Aakar Tere KadmoN Ko To Chumtee Nahi

"Khwahish" Dhoop-Chaau, Dard-Hassi Hissa Hai Zindagi Ka.!!
Par Khuda Saath Ho To Taqdeer Bhi Kabhi Tujh se Roothtee Nahi
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«Reply #6 on: October 22, 2013, 06:27:33 PM »
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ManziloN Ka Gham Karne Se Manzil To Nahi Miltee
Hausle Bhi Tooth Jaate HaiN Aksar Udaas Rehne Se

(kia khoob sher hai  waah,.......)


Kashtiyaan Bhawar meN Aakar Bhi Kabhi Doobtee Nahi
Kuch Chandd UmeedeN Hai Jo Kabhi Toothtee Nahi

(waah khoobsoorat matla hai nyccccccc)

Muflisi Ke Daur MeN Aakhir Kya Khareedoge Bazaar Se
Ghar Laut Chalo,Kya KhwahisheN AankhoN Ko Chubtee Nahi

bohat khoob ,zindagee ki haqeeqaton se qareeb ter ,bohat khoob,..)


Kabhi Apni Be-Basi Par Ghar Ke Dar-o-Deewar Ro Dete haiN
Par Umeed Ki Shama  Jaltee Rahi, Woh Kabhi Bujhtee Nahi

(umeed ki shamma kabhi bujhtee nahin ,..waahhh waah waahh)

Pucha Ek Sache Fakeer Se, Khush Rehne Ka Saleeqa Kya Hai
Bin Maa-Baap Ke DuayoN Ke,Koi Raah Zindagi MeN Sujhtee Nahi

(waahh waahh kia haseen hyaal hai  jee ,
laajawab aik rau iss sher ki nazar joh dil ko choo gaya sach main maa baap ki duayon rab ki rehmat hain )


Musafir Hai Tu  Ehh Bande, Chalte Rehna Tera Naseeb..!!
Manzil Kabhi Khud Aakar Tere KadmoN Ko To Chumtee Nahi,

kia sachee our kharee baat kee hai khwahish jee aap ne,..
waahhhhhh khoob se khoob ter  khyaa.l . daad daad daad,


"Khwahish" Dhoop-Chaau, Dard-Hassi Hissa Hai Zindagi Ka.!!
Par Khuda Saath Ho To Taqdeer Bhi Kabhi Tujh se Roothtee Nahi

(waah haseen maqta hai , over all saree ghazal a1 hai jee bohat bohat c daad
aik rau ke sath,...)
                ~~~~~Khwahish~~~~
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«Reply #7 on: October 22, 2013, 07:18:24 PM »
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Khwahish Jee Aadaab...!


Bahut khoob janab bade hi umdaa khayaalaat ko khoob lafz diye haiN aapne...

Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe janab.. par aakhri do ashaaroN ke kia kahne ... behad khoob jee.. Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez...
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«Reply #8 on: October 22, 2013, 07:20:40 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob, dhron daad Khwahish Sahab ... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: October 22, 2013, 08:56:11 PM »
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Quote from: khwahish on October 22, 2013, 05:06:41 PM
ManziloN Ka Gham Karne Se Manzil To Nahi Miltee
Hausle Bhi Tooth Jaate HaiN Aksar Udaas Rehne Se


Kashtiyaan Bhawar meN Aakar Bhi Kabhi Doobtee Nahi
Kuch Chandd UmeedeN Hai Jo Kabhi Toothtee Nahi

Muflisi Ke Daur MeN Aakhir Kya Khareedoge Bazaar Se
Ghar Laut Chalo,Kya KhwahisheN AankhoN Ko Chubtee Nahi

Kabhi Apni Be-Basi Par Ghar Ke Dar-o-Deewar Ro Dete haiN
Par Umeed Ki Shama  Jaltee Rahi, Woh Kabhi Bujhtee Nahi

Pucha Ek Sache Fakeer Se, Khush Rehne Ka Saleeqa Kya Hai
Bin Maa-Baap Ke DuayoN Ke,Koi Raah Zindagi MeN Sujhtee Nahi

Musafir Hai Tu  Ehh Bande, Chalte Rehna Tera Naseeb..!!
Manzil Kabhi Khud Aakar Tere KadmoN Ko To Chumtee Nahi

"Khwahish" Dhoop-Chaau, Dard-Hassi Hissa Hai Zindagi Ka.!!
Par Khuda Saath Ho To Taqdeer Bhi Kabhi Tujh se Roothtee Nahi


                ~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~
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Khwaish ji... koi ek sher nahin quote kar paayi ke yeh achcha hai kyunki sabhi bahut hi achche hai isiliye poori ghazal hi quote kar dee.. wallah behtareen aur umda peshkash.. dil se hazaron daaaaad qubool kijiyega...
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«Reply #10 on: October 22, 2013, 10:59:11 PM »
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bahut khoob khwahish ji
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«Reply #11 on: October 23, 2013, 12:18:03 AM »
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Quote from: khwahish on October 22, 2013, 05:06:41 PM
ManziloN Ka Gham Karne Se Manzil To Nahi Miltee
Hausle Bhi Tooth Jaate HaiN Aksar Udaas Rehne Se

Waahhhhhh Kya bat kya bat.......


Kashtiyaan Bhawar meN Aakar Bhi Kabhi Doobtee Nahi
Kuch Chandd UmeedeN Hai Jo Kabhi Toothtee Nahi

Muflisi Ke Daur MeN Aakhir Kya Khareedoge Bazaar Se
Ghar Laut Chalo,Kya KhwahisheN AankhoN Ko Chubtee Nahi

Kabhi Apni Be-Basi Par Ghar Ke Dar-o-Deewar Ro Dete haiN
Par Umeed Ki Shama  Jaltee Rahi, Woh Kabhi Bujhtee Nahi

Pucha Ek Sache Fakeer Se, Khush Rehne Ka Saleeqa Kya Hai
Bin Maa-Baap Ke DuayoN Ke,Koi Raah Zindagi MeN Sujhtee Nahi

Musafir Hai Tu  Ehh Bande, Chalte Rehna Tera Naseeb..!!
Manzil Kabhi Khud Aakar Tere KadmoN Ko To Chumtee Nahi

"Khwahish" Dhoop-Chaau, Dard-Hassi Hissa Hai Zindagi Ka.!!
Par Khuda Saath Ho To Taqdeer Bhi Kabhi Tujh se Roothtee Nahi


                ~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~
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«Reply #12 on: October 23, 2013, 12:50:45 AM »
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bahut hi umdaa khawahish ji...superb creation
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«Reply #13 on: October 23, 2013, 12:52:59 AM »
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bahut hi umdaa khawahish ji...superb creation
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«Reply #14 on: October 23, 2013, 02:45:13 AM »
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Quote from: khwahish on October 22, 2013, 05:06:41 PM
ManziloN Ka Gham Karne Se Manzil To Nahi Miltee
Hausle Bhi Tooth Jaate HaiN Aksar Udaas Rehne Se


Kashtiyaan Bhawar meN Aakar Bhi Kabhi Doobtee Nahi
Kuch Chandd UmeedeN Hai Jo Kabhi Toothtee Nahi

Muflisi Ke Daur MeN Aakhir Kya Khareedoge Bazaar Se
Ghar Laut Chalo,Kya KhwahisheN AankhoN Ko Chubtee Nahi

Kabhi Apni Be-Basi Par Ghar Ke Dar-o-Deewar Ro Dete haiN
Par Umeed Ki Shama  Jaltee Rahi, Woh Kabhi Bujhtee Nahi

Pucha Ek Sache Fakeer Se, Khush Rehne Ka Saleeqa Kya Hai
Bin Maa-Baap Ke DuayoN Ke,Koi Raah Zindagi MeN Sujhtee Nahi

Musafir Hai Tu  Ehh Bande, Chalte Rehna Tera Naseeb..!!
Manzil Kabhi Khud Aakar Tere KadmoN Ko To Chumtee Nahi

"Khwahish" Dhoop-Chaau, Dard-Hassi Hissa Hai Zindagi Ka.!!
Par Khuda Saath Ho To Taqdeer Bhi Kabhi Tujh se Roothtee Nahi


                ~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~
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