My composition in Hindi

by R.Pankaj on April 25, 2009, 06:32:15 AM
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घर

मैं रहता था तेरे घर,
मेरा घर था तेरा घर।

इक अंगना और इक छत थी,
इक धरती थी, इक अम्बर।

घण्टी और अज़ान एक थी,
इक चादर, इक पीताम्बर।

मेरे जन, तेरे बन्दे,
जहर बुझे, तीखे तेवर।

पूजा स्थल के पास खडे,
दोनों ही काँपें थर-थर।

मन्दिर की धक्कमपेल देख,
मैं राम खडा ताकूँ बेघर।

चादर तार-तार हो गई,
कीच में लिपटा पीताम्बर।

तेरा तन जो है घायल,
घाव लगे मेरे मन पर।

ध्वज मेरा धराशायी हुआ,
जब लूटा था तेरा घर।

तेरी जो दीवार गिरी,
कहां रहा मेरा भी घर।


दिवाली बनी है शोक दिवस,
वन गमन हुआ दशहरे पर।

अंधियारे को भेद न पाया,
चिराग  राम का कोई शर।

मन भटकाते उगलें शोले,
ओढें आस्था का आडम्बर।

मारीच और शैतान घुसे,
लोक लुभावन चेहरे धर।

द्वारपाल ही बन बैठे स्वामी,
जय विजय स्वर्ग सिंहासन पर।

मैं रहता था तेरे घर,
मेरा घर था तेरा घर।
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«Reply #1 on: April 25, 2009, 06:45:37 AM »
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Subhan_allah Pankaj is rachna ki jitni tareef ki jay uti kam hain.........bohat bohat bohattttttttttttt behtareen peshkash. Khuda tumhe bohat khushiya de..."AAMEEN"
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«Reply #2 on: April 25, 2009, 06:47:05 AM »
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WAAH PANKAJ JEE...
BAHUT ACCHE..
WELCOME....
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«Reply #3 on: April 25, 2009, 11:50:54 AM »
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bahoot bahoot Khoob Pandit Ji.. Very Beautifuly described. Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: April 25, 2009, 12:47:51 PM »
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Waah Bohat Achche Likha Hai Aapne, Pankaj Ji,.
Pehli Do Lines To Mashallah kya Khoob Kahi hai,.

Yunhi Likhte Rahiye./
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«Reply #5 on: April 26, 2009, 01:43:24 AM »
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Aap jaise kadrdaan milte rahe to raasta mil jayega
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«Reply #6 on: April 26, 2009, 03:13:44 AM »
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Quote from: R.Pankaj on April 25, 2009, 06:32:15 AM
घर

मैं रहता था तेरे घर,
मेरा घर था तेरा घर।

इक अंगना और इक छत थी,
इक धरती थी, इक अम्बर।

घण्टी और अज़ान एक थी,
इक चादर, इक पीताम्बर।

मेरे जन, तेरे बन्दे,
जहर बुझे, तीखे तेवर।

पूजा स्थल के पास खडे,
दोनों ही काँपें थर-थर।

मन्दिर की धक्कमपेल देख,
मैं राम खडा ताकूँ बेघर।

चादर तार-तार हो गई,
कीच में लिपटा पीताम्बर।

तेरा तन जो है घायल,
घाव लगे मेरे मन पर।

ध्वज मेरा धराशायी हुआ,
जब लूटा था तेरा घर।

तेरी जो दीवार गिरी,
कहां रहा मेरा भी घर।


दिवाली बनी है शोक दिवस,
वन गमन हुआ दशहरे पर।

अंधियारे को भेद न पाया,
चिराग  राम का कोई शर।

मन भटकाते उगलें शोले,
ओढें आस्था का आडम्बर।

मारीच और शैतान घुसे,
लोक लुभावन चेहरे धर।

द्वारपाल ही बन बैठे स्वामी,
जय विजय स्वर्ग सिंहासन पर।

मैं रहता था तेरे घर,
मेरा घर था तेरा घर।

gud one pankaj jee..
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«Reply #7 on: April 26, 2009, 07:12:27 AM »
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Bahut Umda likha hai aap ne Pankaj Ji
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«Reply #8 on: April 26, 2009, 01:26:33 PM »
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Quote from: R.Pankaj on April 26, 2009, 01:43:24 AM
Aap jaise kadrdaan milte rahe to raasta mil jayega

Yunhi Likhte Rahiye, Lamba Safar Karna Hai Aapko,.
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«Reply #9 on: April 27, 2009, 01:43:52 PM »
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Gazal ke kuchh ashaar Khumar-e-Ishq mein pesh hain.Ummeed hai pasand ayenge
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«Reply #10 on: April 27, 2009, 06:48:14 PM »
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wah wah wah kaya baat hai , kaya baat hai... bahoot khoob likha hai.. A wonderful creation.. dil khush ho gaya.. bahoot khoob R. Pankaj ji!!
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«Reply #11 on: April 27, 2009, 07:10:21 PM »
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Bahut Khoob R.Pankaj Ji..Bhaut Hi Khoobsurat Kavita Likhi hai Aapne Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley..
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