<>*Nafraton ki iss duniya me*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 16, 2010, 06:12:40 AM
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<>*Nafraton ki iss duniya me*<>

Nafraton ki iss duniya me kya kaam hai hamara
matlabi logon ka hi to raaj hai yaahan saara

hum jaise bhole logon ko kehti hai duniya pagal
sach hai sabse badtar ho gaya hai insaan yaara

har rishta matlabi har baat apne faydi ki
yehi to karta hai ab to ye jahaan saara

bech di jaati hain betiyan kuch rupyon k liye
beton ne to maa baap ko bhi na chhoda yaara

maa baap ko bhagwaan maan puja jata tha kabhi
aaj jaaydaad k liye marne ki unke dua mangi jati hai yaara...!!!
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«Reply #1 on: August 16, 2010, 07:21:06 AM »
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kafi aacha likha he kasak ji........

zamane ka sach aur sikh dono he isme........

good going
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«Reply #2 on: August 16, 2010, 07:31:06 AM »
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wah wah kya baat hai anamika ji.... bahot hi achchai aur sachi baat kahi hai aapne to... dil ko chhu gayi aapki ye baatein...
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«Reply #3 on: August 16, 2010, 08:05:49 PM »
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Kasak Jee .... Aapki is kavita ke vichaar bahut sachche hai! Per behad tikhe se hai... Shayad aisa hota hai aaj isliye aisa lag raha hai...

per aap aise hi subject per likhti hai yeh dekhker aisa lagta hai ke aapne kafi gehri chote khayi hai... Plz Don't mind hum aise hi kuch bhi kah dete hai.... Abhi naye hai isliye pata nahi kisse kya kaheN.... sad5

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«Reply #4 on: August 17, 2010, 06:51:10 AM »
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hmm..

"Abhi" is duniya me insaan matlab ki sanse leta he
matlab ke liye hi jeeta he matlab ke liye hi marta he
ek paththar ki murat ko matlab ke liye hi pooja jata he
mana to bhagwan he na mano to bas matlab dekha jata he~
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«Reply #5 on: August 17, 2010, 06:53:54 AM »
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hmm..

"Abhi" is duniya me insaan matlab ki sanse leta he
matlab ke liye hi jeeta he matlab ke liye hi marta he
ek paththar ki murat ko matlab ke liye hi pooja jata he
mana to bhagwan he na mano to bas matlab dekha jata he~


thnx abhi ji ......
aur bht mast kaha aapne....
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«Reply #6 on: August 17, 2010, 07:54:03 AM »
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sach ... bahut khoobsurti se aapne sach aur sirf sach likha hai... bahut khoob likha hai...

kyun na hum is jahaan ko sudhaarne ki ek koshish kar le,
aao haath milao humse aaj milke kuch aisa kaam kar le,
bhool chuki hai aaj ki peedi hamaari sabhyata ko,
kyun na hum milke unhe ek baar iska ehsaas dila le,

bachche jo hain aaj ke wo hamaare hi bachche hain,
wo bhi hamaari tarha har dard ko samajhte hain,
bas bhool se gaye hain kuch baatein jeewan ki,
aao ek baar hum apni taraf se koshish karte hain,

mushkil nahi hai is jahan ko fir haseen banaana,
bas ek chhoti si hai koshish humein karna,
dil me mohabbat aaj bhi hai zinda, bas soya hai,
 us ehsaas ko hai humein ek bar jagaana...
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«Reply #7 on: August 17, 2010, 07:57:43 AM »
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sach ... bahut khoobsurti se aapne sach aur sirf sach likha hai... bahut khoob likha hai...

kyun na hum is jahaan ko sudhaarne ki ek koshish kar le,
aao haath milao humse aaj milke kuch aisa kaam kar le,
bhool chuki hai aaj ki peedi hamaari sabhyata ko,
kyun na hum milke unhe ek baar iska ehsaas dila le,

bachche jo hain aaj ke wo hamaare hi bachche hain,
wo bhi hamaari tarha har dard ko samajhte hain,
bas bhool se gaye hain kuch baatein jeewan ki,
aao ek baar hum apni taraf se koshish karte hain,

mushkil nahi hai is jahan ko fir haseen banaana,
bas ek chhoti si hai koshish humein karna,
dil me mohabbat aaj bhi hai zinda, bas soya hai,
 us ehsaas ko hai humein ek bar jagaana...

bhttttttt khubb klaskar ji.....mastam reply ji.......
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«Reply #8 on: August 17, 2010, 08:10:49 AM »
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Usual Smile  par aapka jawab kahaan hai....

bhttttttt khubb klaskar ji.....mastam reply ji.......
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«Reply #9 on: August 17, 2010, 08:17:15 AM »
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U R GR8 AS USUAL AnaMiKa-di..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

I just be with you in similar feelings....by singing this song....
Yeh mehlo, Yeh takhto, Yeh Tajo ki duniya
Yeh insaan key dushman samajo ki duniya
Yeh daulat key bhooke, ravajo ki duniya
Yeh duniya agar mil bhi jaye toh kya hai?
...
Jala do ise, phoonk dalo yeh duniya
Mere saamne sey hatalo yeh duniya
Tumhari hai, tum hi sambhalo yeh duniya
Yeh duniya agar mil bhi jaye toh kya hai?


<>*Nafraton ki iss duniya me*<>

Nafraton ki iss duniya me kya kaam hai hamara
matlabi logon ka hi to raaj hai yaahan saara

hum jaise bhole logon ko kehti hai duniya pagal
sach hai sabse badtar ho gaya hai insaan yaara

har rishta matlabi har baat apne faydi ki
yehi to karta hai ab to ye jahaan saara

bech di jaati hain betiyan kuch rupyon k liye
beton ne to maa baap ko bhi na chhoda yaara

maa baap ko bhagwaan maan puja jata tha kabhi
aaj jaaydaad k liye marne ki unke dua mangi jati hai yaara...!!!
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«Reply #10 on: August 17, 2010, 09:12:26 AM »
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ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

kasak ji ye kya kah diyaaaaaaaaaa

hammmmmmmmmmmmmm but sahi b hai

hahahha   v. nice creatation

is duniya me matlabi har ek insaan hai
har kahi faila hua khuni nishaan hai
kahin hua katl-e-aam dil ka
kahin mita kisi pe koi "rahi" anjaan hai
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«Reply #11 on: August 17, 2010, 09:19:34 AM »
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ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

kasak ji ye kya kah diyaaaaaaaaaa

hammmmmmmmmmmmmm but sahi b hai

hahahha   v. nice creatation

is duniya me matlabi har ek insaan hai
har kahi faila hua khuni nishaan hai
kahin hua katl-e-aam dil ka
kahin mita kisi pe koi "rahi" anjaan hai

kahan the aap itne din raahi ji......??
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«Reply #12 on: August 17, 2010, 09:33:23 AM »
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kahan the aap itne din raahi ji......??

ji hamare yahan yo india khul nahi raha tha

lagta hai last tym maine jyada hi post kar di isliye block ho gaya
hahahahahahaha

mai bhi betab tha yahan mehfil me aane ko
bade jajbat hai dil me jara sab ko batane ko
kabhi na dur jane ki karu koshish yahan se mai
chala aaonga har din yahan sab ko satane ko



ehehehehehehehehe

yahi hai jajbaat
eheheh
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