|| Pukara Karo.....Priiya..||

by manzil-e-ishq on March 03, 2011, 08:38:43 AM
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«Reply #15 on: March 04, 2011, 07:48:28 AM »
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aapki sabse achhi jo baat hai likhne me wo hai Theame aur rythm.
aapko blive nhi hoga pr pahli baar yo par mene ek post ka sirf title dekh kr reply banaya tha 10 line ka lekin net nhi hone ke keran evning me jab parh ke reply kiya to 10 ki jagah 4 line hi yaad aye sad5
mai kagaz pr likhta hi nhi kuch.
jo bhi ho aapka post bilkul mene jo socha tha wesa hi tha.
keep it up Manzil ji.
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«Reply #16 on: March 04, 2011, 08:46:04 AM »
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thanx nirala ji.......
par aapne kuch jyada hi tareef kar di meri.....
aapka reply to jaise ki maine pahle kaha....
bht pasand aaya mujhe....
par ab bura lag raha hai ki ise pura nahi pad payi main....
khair itni izzat bakshne ka bht bht shukria.......

aapki sabse achhi jo baat hai likhne me wo hai Theame aur rythm.
aapko blive nhi hoga pr pahli baar yo par mene ek post ka sirf title dekh kr reply banaya tha 10 line ka lekin net nhi hone ke keran evning me jab parh ke reply kiya to 10 ki jagah 4 line hi yaad aye sad5
mai kagaz pr likhta hi nhi kuch.
jo bhi ho aapka post bilkul mene jo socha tha wesa hi tha.
keep it up Manzil ji.
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«Reply #17 on: March 04, 2011, 08:49:18 AM »
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pasandgi ka shukria anaam ji.....
aapka reply to sach me kamal hai.....
aap likhte bht accha ho.....
awesum reply ji....
thanx for dis beautiful reply....

Mast poem Priya dost.......... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Khushi ho ya gam Har pal tujhe pukaaraa hai
Tere he saath Har sapna apnaa sajaayaa hai

Jaagte huye aur neend mai bhee tujhi ko pukaaraa hai
Jeevan ka Har lamhaa tere saath he tou gujaaraa hai

Dil mai tere humne apnaa aashiyaanaa banaayaa hai
Tujhe he dil-0-jaan se humne behaddh chahaa hai





Quote author=manzil-e-ishq link=topic=62317.msg1119760#msg1119760 date=1299141523]
Ranj ke lamho se na nawaja karo...
Apni sab tanhaiyo me pukara karo...
 
lamha lamha  mujhse dur  na jaya karo...
jeest ki pareshaniyo me pukara karo...
 
sar apne hum le lenge tere sabhi iljaam...
mujhko apni nakamiyo me pukara karo..
 
khawab banke sirhane baith jaya karo...
neend me… nadaniyo me… pukara karo...


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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #18 on: March 04, 2011, 08:51:00 AM »
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shukria khamosh ji......

GUD ONE M.E.I
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dead heart
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«Reply #19 on: March 04, 2011, 08:05:00 PM »
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Priya di, Anaam di, MG jee aur Nirala dost..
Applause Applause Applause Applause
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #20 on: March 04, 2011, 10:15:29 PM »
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Wah Manzile ji,bahut khoob.khoobsurat peshkash,keep it up.hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #21 on: March 05, 2011, 07:08:33 AM »
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thanx rahim....
god bless u...

Priya di, Anaam di, MG jee aur Nirala dost..
Applause Applause Applause Applause
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #22 on: March 05, 2011, 07:09:04 AM »
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shukria madhu ji....

Wah Manzile ji,bahut khoob.khoobsurat peshkash,keep it up.hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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