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Ranj ke lamho se na nawaja karo...
Apni sab tanhaiyo me pukara karo...
lamha lamha mujhse dur na jaya karo...
jeest ki pareshaniyo me pukara karo...
sar apne hum le lenge tere sabhi iljaam...
mujhko apni nakamiyo me pukara karo..
khawab banke sirhane baith jaya karo...
neend me… nadaniyo me… pukara karo...
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«Reply #2 on: March 03, 2011, 08:45:17 AM » |
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bahut khub manzilji.....
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«Reply #3 on: March 03, 2011, 12:42:49 PM » |
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Bahut Khub Priya JI
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«Reply #6 on: March 03, 2011, 01:04:37 PM » |
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hamne to har shab pukaara tumhe
kabhi dil ki aawaz bhi suna karo !!
kab tak behlaate ummeedo se dil ko
kabhi khamosh cheekhon par bhi aaya kari !!
uu na do ab duhaiyon ki talkhiyan
begaana hi samajh milne milaane aaya karo !!
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don mnd ji
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good poem
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«Reply #7 on: March 03, 2011, 01:09:52 PM » |
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kya kahne nirala ji...... mindblowing reply ji.... shabd nahi mmil rahe taarif ke liye... sply last one...... superb... hamne to har shab pukaara tumhe
kabhi dil ki aawaz bhi suna karo !!
kab tak behlaate ummeedo se dil ko
kabhi khamosh cheekhon par bhi aaya kari !!
uu na do ab duhaiyon ki talkhiyan
begaana hi samajh milne milaane aaya karo !!
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don mnd ji
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good poem
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«Reply #8 on: March 03, 2011, 01:10:47 PM » |
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wahh priya........
kafi gehare aur khobsurat ehsaas baya kiye he apne....
bahot hi khubsurat poetry he ...........keep it up ji....
few lines from my sideYadey Mangkar Ishq Ka Takaza Na Karo
Jalim Ese To Khud Ka Munafa Na Karo
Har Baar To Tumhe Hi Puakara Kiye He
Lat Ban Hi Gaye Ho Ab Aur Sahara Na Karo
Sikhne Do Hume Akele Bhi Dard Sahne Ki Rasme
Har Baar Akar Hume Nakara Na Karo
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«Reply #10 on: March 03, 2011, 08:13:57 PM » |
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Ranj ke lamho se na nawaja karo...
Apni sab tanhaiyo me pukara karo...
lamha lamha mujhse dur na jaya karo...
jeest ki pareshaniyo me pukara karo...
sar apne hum le lenge tere sabhi iljaam...
mujhko apni nakamiyo me pukara karo..
khawab banke sirhane baith jaya karo...
neend me… nadaniyo me… pukara karo...
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«Reply #11 on: March 04, 2011, 07:21:28 AM » |
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shukria manjum ji.... bahut khub manzilji.....
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«Reply #12 on: March 04, 2011, 07:22:03 AM » |
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thanx rishi ji..... Bahut Khub Priya JI
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«Reply #14 on: March 04, 2011, 07:26:38 AM » |
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thanx alot mg....... & ur reply is as usual fantastic...... tooooo..... gooooood... ji... wahh priya........
kafi gehare aur khobsurat ehsaas baya kiye he apne....
bahot hi khubsurat poetry he ...........keep it up ji....
few lines from my sideYadey Mangkar Ishq Ka Takaza Na Karo
Jalim Ese To Khud Ka Munafa Na Karo
Har Baar To Tumhe Hi Puakara Kiye He
Lat Ban Hi Gaye Ho Ab Aur Sahara Na Karo
Sikhne Do Hume Akele Bhi Dard Sahne Ki Rasme
Har Baar Akar Hume Nakara Na Karo
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