Pyaar, Saweekar Kar -Panna 2:Shairi - E

Pooja

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«Reply #15 on: May 02, 2009, 04:36:35 AM »

wah wah kaya baat hai Sophi.. bahoot khoob!!!


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Pooja

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Re: Pyaar, Saweekar Kar

«Reply #16 on: May 02, 2009, 04:41:10 AM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on April 30, 2009, 10:51:31 PM

very nice,mindblowing,Pooja ji.
great work,keep it up.

shukaria Madhuwesh ji

Quote from: khwaish on May 01, 2009, 03:17:27 AM

wah Wah!! bahut Bhaut Khoob Pooja..Asaan se lafzo mein Gehri Baatein..Bahut ache...

bahoot bahoot shukaria Khwaish ji....

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on May 01, 2009, 08:42:45 AM

Arey Pooja aisa nahi ke main likhna nahi chahta, par tum to janti ho mera style of work. Isiliye darta hu ke kahi tum naraaz na ho jao...

Mit jayege sare kasht tere, mil jayegi tujhko mukhti

Kya rakh_kha hain dairo haram me, aa tu mera deedar kar....

-SG-

App to bas app he hai... ab kaya kaha jaaye aor.. Usual Smile


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Pooja

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Re: Pyaar, Saweekar Kar

«Reply #17 on: May 02, 2009, 04:41:55 AM »

Quote from: sapana on May 01, 2009, 03:46:08 AM

Very nice Pooja.

Bhagawanki her baat swikaar hai.

Ma ho, bahen ho, beti ho,biwi ho,
darraje hai buland tere o ronewali,
tere samne hai duniyake unvaan swikaar kar.
Sapana

bahoot khoob sapana!!


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Pooja

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Re: Pyaar, Saweekar Kar

«Reply #18 on: May 02, 2009, 04:44:35 AM »

Quote from: @kaash on May 01, 2009, 12:57:04 PM

waah bohot khoob Pooja ji...ek baar phir outstanding poem..n as per me in real sense it is the second part of former one..u create it amazingly..bohot seekhne ko milta hai..
is tarah ki jo swabhavik rachnaye hoti hain vo bohot achi lagti hain aur waah
kahne se pehle hi clap ka man karta hai.

too good..applause 4 this God gifted talent also...

KHUDA KARE AISE HI AAPKI KALAM MAHFIL ME ROSHNI KARTI RAHE
LIKHNE LAGENEGE VO BHI JO SIRF AB TAK HAIN PADHTE RAHE


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Pooja

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Re: Pyaar, Saweekar Kar

«Reply #19 on: May 02, 2009, 04:46:42 AM »

Quote from: Mann on May 02, 2009, 02:51:55 AM

Wah Pooja Ji.... Bahut Khoooooooob.. Applause

Bahut Gaharaai se Likhi Lagti hai Yeh Poem aapne.. Great Words.. Usual Smile

**~** Mann **~**

Tahe dil se shukaria Mann ji


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deepika_divya

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Re: Pyaar, Saweekar Kar

«Reply #20 on: May 02, 2009, 06:27:00 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on May 02, 2009, 04:36:35 AM

wah wah kaya baat hai Sophi.. bahoot khoob!!!

Thnak u so much Pooja Di


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SARVESH RASTOGI

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Re: Pyaar, Saweekar Kar

«Reply #21 on: May 05, 2009, 03:16:36 AM »

Bahut khoob Pooja Ji
Dil se likha hai
Lekin ek clarification chahta hun
Shabdon ke is jadoo ko "na" apne jeevan me sweekar kar
"na" kahne ki kya vajah, samajh nahin aayee
Would you please like to enlighten me
SARVESH RASTOGI


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SARVESH RASTOGI

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Re: Pyaar, Saweekar Kar

«Reply #22 on: May 05, 2009, 03:21:16 AM »

Quote from: Sophi on May 02, 2009, 04:22:20 AM

Kya baat hai Pooja Di.. ak sahi baat kahi hai.. yahin Zindagi Jeena ka sahi paimana hai

Ak kosih meri taraf se

Jashan manaye log agar teri barbaadi pe
Tu bhi ja uss jasan mein shamil ho ja

Rang cheen le agar duniyan teri zindgai k
tho Berangat mein bhi tu khush ho ja

Kya hua agar log tujhe bura bala kahe
bas apne Dil ki sunn uar har gham bhul ja

~~ Divya

Bahut khoob Sophi Ji
Badi zindadili ka paigam hai aapke ashar me
Tu bhi us jashn me shamil ho ja, kya khoob kaha hai
Achchha laga
SARVESH RASTOGI


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Pooja

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Re: Pyaar, Saweekar Kar

«Reply #23 on: May 05, 2009, 05:30:14 PM »

Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on May 05, 2009, 03:16:36 AM

Agar app meri

Quote from: Pooja on April 30, 2009, 05:07:18 PM

Tanha tanha is jeevan main, shabd karte hai kaam jaadu ka
shabdo ke is jaadu ko, na apne jeevan main asweekar kar

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Agar app dhayan se meri line dekhein to main NA apne jeevan main Asweekar kar likha hai!!!

shayad her jagah sweekar likhne ki wajah se is line main bhi saweekar he parra gay ahai apne.... mujhe bhi laga tha likhte waqat ... magar meri adat hai ek sans main jo man mai ayya likh dena.. aor doosri najar se pahle post kar deti hu... is liye bahoot typo bhi ho jaati hai aor kai baar rythem nahi milati...magar jab bhi soch kar likhna chaha hai.. kalam ne kabhi sath nahi diya


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Pooja

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Re: Pyaar, Saweekar Kar

«Reply #24 on: May 05, 2009, 05:35:22 PM »

Quote from: sapana on May 01, 2009, 03:46:08 AM

Very nice Pooja.

Bhagawanki her baat swikaar hai.

Ma ho, bahen ho, beti ho,biwi ho,
darraje hai buland tere o ronewali,
tere samne hai duniyake unvaan swikaar kar.
Sapana

I am so sorry sapna, pata nahi apko kaise jawab likhna bhool gai main... bahoot achi line likhi hai apne... apki lines parr kar jo man mai ayya hai wo he likhne lagi hu..

Her Rishata ho jaata hai saweekar
khud se khud ka rishta sweekar ho nahi paata

seh jaati hai kuch bhi her ek rishte ke liye
phir kyun khud se khud ka haq manga nahi jaata

banti tukaro main, na raha khud ka koi astitav
bin astitav ke khud ke rishto se bhi maan mil nahi paata

Her Rishata ho jaata hai saweekar
khud se khud ka rishta sweekar ho nahi paata


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Pooja

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Re: Pyaar, Saweekar Kar

«Reply #25 on: May 05, 2009, 06:39:21 PM »

Quote from: @kaash on May 05, 2009, 06:02:26 PM

Waah Pooja ji bahot acha likha hai aapne ye jawaab.kitna sachha likha hai too nice Clapping Smiley

Shukaria Kash ji!!!!


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