Pyaar, Saweekar Kar:Shairi - E

Pooja

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Ajj apni is poem ko padte waqat ek aor baat man mai aai hai.. pata nahi sahi tarah se shabdo main pesh kar saku ya nahi... magar likhneki koshish karne lagi hu...

http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/tanziya-aur-tehreekbaksh-shayariyan/kaya-anarth-rishto-ke-sath-hua-hai-t45856.0.html

hai bahoot dard her jeevan main
jahan se bhi mile pyaar, saweekar kar

Karm ka marg rahe hamesha sahi tera
per khud ke armaano ka bhi na triskaar kar

Kon kahega kaya, sochega kaya, is ki parwaah ab kyun
Bhagwaan ke samne bas her ek baat saweekar kar

Tanha tanha is jeevan main, shabd karte hai kaam jaadu ka
shabdo ke is jaadu ko, na apne jeevan main asweekar kar

hai bahoot dard her jeevan main
jahan se bhi mile pyaar, saweekar kar


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angel4u

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Re: Pyaar, Saweekar Kar

«Reply #1 on: April 30, 2009, 05:08:48 PM »

Once again beautiful poetry, everytime i read your poetry i find it better than the before, and if i read the previous one, i still find it marvellous, How do you do that DI??


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Talat

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Re: Pyaar, Saweekar Kar

«Reply #2 on: April 30, 2009, 05:34:59 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on April 30, 2009, 05:07:18 PM

Beautiful....Dil ke andar tak utarti chali gayi hai ye poem.... Clapping Smiley

Really a nice one Pooja...Aur aaj mann bhi kuch aisa sa hi ho raha hai DOH


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Pooja

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Re: Pyaar, Saweekar Kar

«Reply #3 on: April 30, 2009, 05:38:37 PM »

Quote from: {Angel} on April 30, 2009, 05:08:48 PM

Once again beautiful poetry, everytime i read your poetry i find it better than the before, and if i read the previous one, i still find it marvellous, How do you do that DI??

Is waqat to Thanks karne ke shabd nahi mil rahe hai Mujhe Angel!! App ke comments per kaya likhu... dil se bahoot bahoot bahoot shukaria Angel!!


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Pooja

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Re: Pyaar, Saweekar Kar

«Reply #4 on: April 30, 2009, 05:39:23 PM »

Quote from: Celmira on April 30, 2009, 05:34:59 PM

Beautiful....Dil ke andar tak utarti chali gayi hai ye poem.... Clapping Smiley

Really a nice one Pooja...Aur aaj mann bhi kuch aisa sa hi ho raha hai DOH

Thanks Celmira... yah hui na baat, apka man hua, Humne likh diya... Ho jaao shuru... pahli jaadu ki japhi meri taraf se apko Usual Smile


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Bharat

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Re: Pyaar, Saweekar Kar

«Reply #5 on: April 30, 2009, 05:42:42 PM »

Pooja,
very nice.....


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Pooja

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Re: Pyaar, Saweekar Kar

«Reply #6 on: April 30, 2009, 05:44:20 PM »

Quote from: Bharat on April 30, 2009, 05:42:42 PM

Pooja,
very nice.....

Thanks Bharat ji!!!


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: Pyaar, Saweekar Kar

«Reply #7 on: April 30, 2009, 07:42:55 PM »

Nice work Pooja...


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Pooja

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Re: Pyaar, Saweekar Kar

«Reply #8 on: April 30, 2009, 07:44:28 PM »

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 30, 2009, 07:42:55 PM

Nice work Pooja...

Kabhi do line bhi sath main likh diya karo!!

Shukaria apko likha pasand ayya!!


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madhuwesh

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Re: Pyaar, Saweekar Kar

«Reply #9 on: April 30, 2009, 10:51:31 PM »

very nice,mindblowing,Pooja ji.
great work,keep it up.


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Re: Pyaar, Saweekar Kar

«Reply #10 on: May 01, 2009, 03:17:27 AM »

wah Wah!! bahut Bhaut Khoob Pooja..Asaan se lafzo mein Gehri Baatein..Bahut ache...


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sapana

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Re: Pyaar, Saweekar Kar

«Reply #11 on: May 01, 2009, 03:46:08 AM »

Very nice Pooja.

Bhagawanki her baat swikaar hai.

Ma ho, bahen ho, beti ho,biwi ho,
darraje hai buland tere o ronewali,
tere samne hai duniyake unvaan swikaar kar.
Sapana


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: Pyaar, Saweekar Kar

«Reply #12 on: May 01, 2009, 08:42:45 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on April 30, 2009, 07:44:28 PM

Kabhi do line bhi sath main likh diya karo!!

Shukaria apko likha pasand ayya!!

Arey Pooja aisa nahi ke main likhna nahi chahta, par tum to janti ho mera style of work. Isiliye darta hu ke kahi tum naraaz na ho jao...

Mit jayege sare kasht tere, mil jayegi tujhko mukhti

Kya rakh_kha hain dairo haram me, aa tu mera deedar kar....

-SG-


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_Vicky_

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Re: Pyaar, Saweekar Kar

«Reply #13 on: May 02, 2009, 02:51:55 AM »

Wah Pooja Ji.... Bahut Khoooooooob.. Applause

Bahut Gaharaai se Likhi Lagti hai Yeh Poem aapne.. Great Words.. Usual Smile

**~** Mann **~**


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deepika_divya

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Re: Pyaar, Saweekar Kar

«Reply #14 on: May 02, 2009, 04:22:20 AM »

Kya baat hai Pooja Di.. ak sahi baat kahi hai.. yahin Zindagi Jeena ka sahi paimana hai

Ak kosih meri taraf se

Jashan manaye log agar teri barbaadi pe
Tu bhi ja uss jasan mein shamil ho ja

Rang cheen le agar duniyan teri zindgai k
tho Berangat mein bhi tu khush ho ja

Kya hua agar log tujhe bura bala kahe
bas apne Dil ki sunn uar har gham bhul ja

~~ Divya


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