Qatal Kiye Ja Rahe Hai Hum:Shairi - E

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Ajj kal TV per bacho ke bahoot se show aa rahe hai... man hairan rah jaata hai, unke guno ko dekh kar... magar man mai ek dukh bhari siski bhi uthi... ki show ki dorr mai... hum kis tarah se in bacho ke bachpan ko khatam karte ja rahe hai... bas usi bhawna mai jo man mai ayya wo likhati chali gai:

Taalio ke shor mai, masoom Muskurahto ko kho rahe hai hum
Yeh kis tarah ke yug ka, beej bo rahe hai hum,

Lagi hui hai dorr, her taraf, bacho ki khoobia dikhane mai
Yeh kis tarah ki pratiyogitao ka, chalan chala rahe hai hum,

Abhi umar hai sirf 6 ki aor dekho to jara iske sur
Per is suro ke tamashe mai, unka bachpan ka tamasha kiye ja rahe hai hum,

Dekh kar bacho ke itne show TV per ajj dukhi ho utha man Pooja ka
Kis tarah meethe zahar mai, apne he bacho ke bachpan ka, Qatal kiye ja rahe hai hum!!


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Re: Qatal Kiye Ja Rahe Hai Hum

«Reply #1 on: September 03, 2010, 03:42:48 AM »

dil se nikle jazbaat hain pooja ji..dil ko chhu gaye...bas yehi kuch manna mera bhi hai..aur chahti hun har maa bap samjhenk bachche aaj bacche hain unhe ye masti bhari zindagi jii lene do..ye competiotion ki life to zindagi bhar jini hai unhe..kyun paida hote hi apne sapno k jaal me bandh ke unhe faansi de rahe ho...


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Re: Qatal Kiye Ja Rahe Hai Hum

«Reply #2 on: September 03, 2010, 03:49:22 AM »

Pooja jee,
Bahaut khoob..Acha khayal par ek achi kavita..Haan sach kaha bachon ka bachpan qatl ho raha hai..
Kuch achi cheezein hai yeh shows karne main aur buri bhi..Bahaut khoob.!

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Re: Qatal Kiye Ja Rahe Hai Hum

«Reply #3 on: September 03, 2010, 05:32:27 AM »

Shukaria Kasak and Rahim ji!!


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Re: Qatal Kiye Ja Rahe Hai Hum

«Reply #4 on: September 03, 2010, 05:34:46 AM »

POOJA JI AAPKI BATON SE POORI TARAH SAHMAT HOON


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Re: Qatal Kiye Ja Rahe Hai Hum

«Reply #5 on: September 03, 2010, 06:40:03 AM »

bahut khoobsurat kavita likhi hai aapne Pooja ji aur baatein jo bhi kahi hain isme bilkul sahi kahi hain... sach me aajkal ke bachchon ka bachpan in pratiyogitaon me aur competition ki aag me jal raha hai... chhote se hi unke mann me ye sab bhar diya ja raha hai... programme dekhne me to achche lagte hain par is angle se kabhi socha nahi tha humne... aapki ye poem padh ke sach me aap jaisa feel karne lage hain.. bahut sahi baat kahi hai aapne aur bahut khoobsurat andaaz me...!!!

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Re: Qatal Kiye Ja Rahe Hai Hum

«Reply #6 on: September 03, 2010, 02:46:27 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on September 02, 2010, 11:04:54 PM

Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob!!!!

Aapki Soch, Aapki Samaj To humehsa Se Hi lajawaab Rahi Hai..iss baar aapne bahut hi achi Aur Zaroori Topic Par Kuch likha Hai Pooja..Sach Mein Aajkal har Cheez Commercialized Ho Gayi,Yahan Tak Ke Bacho ke Feelings Ko bhi nahi kuch nahi samjha jaata..


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Re: Qatal Kiye Ja Rahe Hai Hum

«Reply #7 on: September 03, 2010, 02:56:45 PM »

Bohat important Subject par likha hai aapne Pooja jee.....and very well written too.


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Re: Qatal Kiye Ja Rahe Hai Hum

«Reply #8 on: December 05, 2010, 04:28:52 PM »

shukaria dosto... itne dino baad aai hu, socha shayad kisi ne is thread mai apne vichar kavita ke roop mai likhe ho...


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Re: Qatal Kiye Ja Rahe Hai Hum

«Reply #9 on: December 05, 2010, 04:35:21 PM »

gr8 pooja ji nice...


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