raah-e safar me mehfilo ko gulzaar karna aa Gaya.

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raah-e safar me mehfilo ko gulzaar karna aa Gaya
Waqt-e tabdili ko dekh dil se karaar karna aa Gaya

Nikla  safar me to sath raha Hamesha bheed ka,
Par akele Chalkar Samandar  Paar  Karna aa Gaya,

Zindgi-e safar ki Khubsurat si Rangat Dekhkar ,
Badalte Mod par ab Khud se Pyaar Karna aa Gaya,

Har Mukam Par Paucha Par lauta Kahli  Haath,
ab Har Manzil  par Haq se Adhikaar  Karna aa Gaya

Is dil ne mohbaat bi Nafarat bi chalte Safar me dekhi
Likhe Kalam se Shabd aur Mohbat se Vaar Karna aa Gaya

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«Reply #1 on: December 19, 2013, 07:23:37 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: December 19, 2013, 05:14:30 PM »
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Nikla  safar me to sath raha Hamesha bheed ka,
Par akele Chalkar Samandar  Paar  Karna aa Gaya,

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Bahut Achchha Likha Hai. Likhte Rahiye.
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«Reply #5 on: December 19, 2013, 06:09:53 PM »
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raah-e safar me mehfilo ko gulzaar karna aa Gaya
Waqt-e tabdili ko dekh dil se karaar karna aa Gaya

Nikla  safar me to sath raha Hamesha bheed ka,
Par akele Chalkar Samandar  Paar  Karna aa Gaya,

Zindgi-e safar ki Khubsurat si Rangat Dekhkar ,
Badalte Mod par ab Khud se Pyaar Karna aa Gaya,

Har Mukam Par Paucha Par lauta Kahli  Haath,
ab Har Manzil  par Haq se Adhikaar  Karna aa Gaya

Is dil ne mohbaat bi Nafarat bi chalte Safar me dekhi
Likhe Kalam se Shabd aur Mohbat se Vaar Karna aa Gaya

P@w@N




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 boss!!!!!!!!!!  mere khayaal se safar-e-zindagee hogaa------check kar lo
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«Reply #6 on: December 19, 2013, 07:29:34 PM »
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Bahit khoob pawan ji..behahf khubsurat alfaz likhe h.. Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: December 19, 2013, 07:32:40 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: December 19, 2013, 08:53:14 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaaaaah pawan ji... bahut khooooooooooooob...dheron daaaaaaaaaaaaad...
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«Reply #9 on: December 19, 2013, 09:14:38 PM »
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wha wha bhut khub

suriya Ranjan ji....
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«Reply #10 on: December 19, 2013, 09:15:19 PM »
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sukriya sani sir..
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«Reply #11 on: December 19, 2013, 09:17:41 PM »
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Nikla  safar me to sath raha Hamesha bheed ka,
Par akele Chalkar Samandar  Paar  Karna aa Gaya,

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut Achchha Likha Hai. Likhte Rahiye.

sukriya saxena ji......
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«Reply #12 on: December 19, 2013, 09:22:03 PM »
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suriya sir....apna kimati waqt dene keliye!!
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«Reply #13 on: December 19, 2013, 09:24:36 PM »
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 boss!!!!!!!!!!  mere khayaal se safar-e-zindagee hogaa------check kar lo


bosss!!sukriya.....apne sahi kaha safar-e zindgi hi hai....
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«Reply #14 on: December 19, 2013, 09:26:32 PM »
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Bahit khoob pawan ji..behahf khubsurat alfaz likhe h.. Clapping Smiley

sukriya sir ji hausla afzai ka!!!!!
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