roti......................A.B

by adil bechain on December 20, 2012, 05:27:23 AM
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                 eshq-o-ashiqui   ke   siwa  jawaani  mein kaun  hai...,
                 aur   umr-e-aakhir   ke   kahaani   mein   kaun hai...,

                 aayi      qaza     to   rukhsat    ho   gaye    hum...,
                 ab    kise    khabar    pareshaani   mein  kaun hai...,

                 dekein    soorat    teri   ya  nihaarein chand  ko ...,
                 hai  pasho-pesh  mein zehan  ,nishani mein kaun hai...,

                 hai andaaz ye bayaan nirala, khamoshi bhi gahri uski...,
                 dekhna   ye   hai   ke   rawaani   mein   kaun   hai...,

                 khaa   kar   zakhm   bhi   muskuraate  rahe  hum  to...,
                 hua   hairaan   marham ,   giraani   mein  kaun  hai...,

                 lagi     bhook    to  'bechain'  kha   liya  humnein...,
                 hai   hairaan   'roti'  ke  be-imaani  mein kaun hai...,
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«Reply #1 on: December 20, 2012, 05:35:56 AM »
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bahut bahut hi lajawab peshkash...
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«Reply #2 on: December 20, 2012, 05:46:08 AM »
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bahut bahut sunder kamaal kee peshkash ek rau waalee
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«Reply #3 on: December 20, 2012, 06:03:04 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: December 20, 2012, 06:06:47 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: December 20, 2012, 08:25:25 AM »
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Bahut khoob  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: December 22, 2012, 05:36:17 AM »
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shandhar peshkash  Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: December 22, 2012, 02:48:30 PM »
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aayi      qaza     to   rukhsat    ho   gaye    hum...,                  ab    kise    khabar    pareshaani   mein  kaun hai...,                  dekein    soorat    teri   ya  nihaarein chand  ko ...,                  hai  pasho-pesh  mein zehan  ,nishani mein kaun hai..

Bahut umda adil bhai
jaldi hi kuch kiya jaana chahiye..
jyada post ke kaaran acchi post bahut jaldi nazroN se ojhal ho jaati hain
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«Reply #11 on: December 23, 2012, 03:15:48 PM »
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bahut bahut hi lajawab peshkash...

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«Reply #12 on: December 27, 2012, 02:59:13 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

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