--sambhal ke chal--

by vimmi singh on January 25, 2013, 01:49:23 PM
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ye dagar sambhal ke chal
kyun rahe tu bekhabar
anjaan honge raaste, nadan tu nahi
na dar, na jhuk,  apna sir utha ke chal

hoga koi raasta dega tera waasta
sundar si galiyan, failaaye jo bahiyan
unhe aur tu sajaayega kya??
Apni kaabiliyat unhe batlaayega kya!!
Hone na de apna maksad aankho se ojhal
Kuchh is tarah registaan me phul khila ke chal
Hai faili chaaro or beimaani dagabaaji
Kuchh apne hisse ki imaandaari bacha ke chal
na dar,  na jhuk,  apna sir utha ke chal

Desh ki shaan ko,  bhale mar mite aaj tu
Aazad-e-Hind ko naaz hai,Bhagat Singh ko pahchaan tu
Gandhi ki roop rekha , is dil me basa ke chal
Paanv zamin pe rahe’n , uth ke ab akaash chhu
na dar,  na jhuk,  apna sir utha ke chal

ye dagar sambhal ke chal
rah na tu bas bekhabar
anjaan honge raaste, nadan tu nahi
na dar, na jhuk,  apna sir utha ke chal
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«Reply #1 on: January 25, 2013, 01:56:09 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne vimmi jee
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«Reply #2 on: January 25, 2013, 02:22:18 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: January 25, 2013, 03:13:33 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: January 25, 2013, 06:03:49 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne vimmi jee

bahut shukriya Suman ji.....
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«Reply #5 on: January 25, 2013, 08:08:17 PM »
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Vimmy Jee Aadaab!



WaaH jee waaH kia protsahit karne wali kavita kahi hai aapne.. aise lag
raha tha jaise hum Hariwansh Rai jee ki kavita padh rahe ho.. Usual Smile

Bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... is khoobsurat kavitaa par hazaaroN
dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Aise hi likhati rahiye.. bazm meiN aati rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: January 26, 2013, 01:42:09 AM »
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bahut khoob vimmi ji
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«Reply #7 on: January 26, 2013, 06:45:46 AM »
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bahut sunder

bahut bahut shukriya saini sir ji......
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«Reply #8 on: January 26, 2013, 07:12:02 AM »
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bahut khoob
tahe dil se bahut shukriya aqsh ji...
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«Reply #10 on: January 27, 2013, 06:50:57 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Vimmy Jee Aadaab!



WaaH jee waaH kia protsahit karne wali kavita kahi hai aapne.. aise lag
raha tha jaise hum Hariwansh Rai jee ki kavita padh rahe ho.. Usual Smile

Bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... is khoobsurat kavitaa par hazaaroN
dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Aise hi likhati rahiye.. bazm meiN aati rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile


parwaaz ji hume iitni tawajjo dene ke liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya....
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