Sansein jaane bojh kaise jeevan ka--By Kavi Deepak Sharma

by kavyadharateam on October 01, 2008, 09:00:19 AM
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साँस जाने बोझ कैसे जीवन का ढोती रही
नयन बिन अश्रु रहे पर ज़िन्दगी रोती रही ।

एक नाज़ुक ख्वाब का अंजाम कुछ ऐसा हुआ
मैं तड़पता रहा इधर वो उस तरफ़ रोती रही ।

भूख , आंसू और  गम ने उम्र तक पीछा किया
मेहनत के रुख पर ज़र्दियाँ,तन पर फटी धोती रही ।

उस महल के बिस्तरे पे सोते रहे कुत्ते , बिल्लियाँ
धूप में पिछवाडे  एक बच्ची  छोटी सोती  रही

तंग आकर मुफलिसी मन खुदखुशी कर की मगर
दो गज कफ़न को लाश उसकी बाट जोती रही

'दीपक' बशर की ख्वाहिशों का कद इतना बढ गया
ख्वाहिशों की भीड़ में कहीं ज़िन्दगी खोती रही
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«Reply #1 on: October 25, 2008, 02:47:28 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Deepak ji agar yah apne likhi hai to behad bhavuk kavita ki rachna ki hai. bahoot he simple shabdo main bahoot gahari baat kahin hai. dil ko chu gai yah kavita.

Agar apne kisi ki kavita share ki hai to bahoot achi kavita apne yoindia ke sath share ki hai!!
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«Reply #2 on: October 25, 2008, 03:35:58 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Deepak ji agar yah apne likhi hai to behad bhavuk kavita ki rachna ki hai. bahoot he simple shabdo main bahoot gahari baat kahin hai. dil ko chu gai yah kavita.

Agar apne kisi ki kavita share ki hai to bahoot achi kavita apne yoindia ke sath share ki hai!!
Khush aamdeed
aapne Ghazal padi aur aapko achcha laga bahut bahut shukriya.Aap ko pata hi hoga ki Kavi Deepak Sharma ke risaale falakdipti aur manzar ke naam se charchit aur mashhoor hain.Mashaallah aap ki tarif bhi alag andaaz rakhti hai ek shaq aur shubah ke saath. Zahiraana ye qalaam Shayar Deepak Sharma sahib ka hai aur dunia me mashoor hain.Na jaane kitni dafa telecast ho chuka hai,
Khair aap zyada lutf ke liye unki wesite par aayen .aap ka istakwaal karte hain.
bakaul Deepak ji
"aapke ehsaas ko maine apni zubaan de di,
Zamana kahne laga lo shayar ho gaya "Deepak"

aap ka tah-e-dil se shukria

Kavyadhara Team
For Kavi Deepak Sharma
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