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                         wo makaa.n kahaan unke nishaa.n kahaan hain...,
                         mujh  se  waabastaa  wo insaa.n kahaan hain...,

                         zakeera aslaah ka chaar-soo dikaai diya kare...,
                         mahakte hue chaman  wo baagbaa.n kahaan hain...,

                         bejaan se khilaune hain pade hue idhar-udhar...,
                         mere atfaal ke chahkte kaarwaa.n kahaan hain...,

                         falak  pe  udaas  uss  qamar  ke saat jo the...,
                         tim-timimaate  hue wo kahkasha.n kahaan hain...,

                         khizaa.n  aisi  to  nahin  ke  sahra  kar de...,
                         bechain bache hue kuch bayabaa.n kahaan hain...,

                         
                         
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«Reply #1 on: November 12, 2013, 02:34:11 AM »
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waah waah beautiful adil saheb dheron daad
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«Reply #2 on: November 12, 2013, 02:45:17 AM »
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वाह..वाह...आदिल जी....बहुत खूब....ढेरों दाद और दिली मुबारकबाद...
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«Reply #3 on: November 12, 2013, 03:04:28 AM »
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bahot khoooob, lajawaaaaab, bas waaaah hi waaaah...
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«Reply #4 on: November 12, 2013, 03:08:12 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: November 12, 2013, 03:57:15 AM »
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bahut khoob AB saheb.
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«Reply #6 on: November 12, 2013, 05:58:27 AM »
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bejaan se khilaune hain pade hue idhar-udhar...,
 mere atfaal ke chahkte kaarwaa.n kahaan hain...,

waah waah adil jee bahut hi umda ghazal rahi..

Dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #7 on: November 12, 2013, 06:39:04 AM »
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wo makaa.n kahaan unke nishaa.n kahaan hain...,
mujh se waabastaa wo insaa.n kahaan hain...,

zakeera aslaah ka chaar-soo dikaai diya kare...,
mahakte hue chaman wo baagbaa.n mkahaan hain...,

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«Reply #8 on: November 12, 2013, 06:39:46 AM »
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wo makaa.n kahaan unke nishaa.n kahaan hain...,
mujh  se  waabastaa  wo insaa.n kahaan hain...,

zakeera aslaah ka chaar-soo dikaai diya kare...,
mahakte hue chaman  wo baagbaa.n kahaan hain...,

Bahut badhiya Adil bhai
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«Reply #9 on: November 12, 2013, 07:25:29 AM »
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Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Adil saheb, poora kalaam khoobsoorat ehsaasaat se bhara hua, behad khoob, bahut pasand aaya ye kalaam.
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«Reply #10 on: November 12, 2013, 07:20:26 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaah Adil ji kya kehne... Poori kalaam bahut hi pyaari lagi... bahut bahut khoob aur dheron dheron daaaaaaaaad... khaas yeh ashaar bahut pasand aaye..

wo makaa.n kahaan unke nishaa.n kahaan hain...,
mujh  se  waabastaa  wo insaa.n kahaan hain...,

zakeera aslaah ka chaar-soo dikaai diya kare...,
mahakte hue chaman  wo baagbaa.n kahaan hain...,
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«Reply #11 on: November 12, 2013, 07:23:52 PM »
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wo makaa.n kahaan unke nishaa.n kahaan hain...,
mujh  se  waabastaa  wo insaa.n kahaan hain...,

waah waah bohut khooob Adil sahab
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«Reply #12 on: November 12, 2013, 08:59:47 PM »
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                         wo makaa.n kahaan unke nishaa.n kahaan hain...,
                         mujh  se  waabastaa  wo insaa.n kahaan hain...,

                         zakeera aslaah ka chaar-soo dikaai diya kare...,
                         mahakte hue chaman  wo baagbaa.n kahaan hain...,

                         bejaan se khilaune hain pade hue idhar-udhar...,
                         mere atfaal ke chahkte kaarwaa.n kahaan hain...,

                         falak  pe  udaas  uss  qamar  ke saat jo the...,
                         tim-timimaate  hue wo kahkasha.n kahaan hain...,

                         khizaa.n  aisi  to  nahin  ke  sahra  kar de...,
                         bechain bache hue kuch bayabaa.n kahaan hain...,

                         
                         


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«Reply #13 on: November 12, 2013, 09:42:48 PM »
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bahut umda
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«Reply #14 on: November 12, 2013, 10:47:44 PM »
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falak  pe  udaas  uss  qamar  ke saat jo the...,
tim-timimaate  hue wo kahkasha.n kahaan hain...,

adil saahab aadaab.. aapki ghazal waaqai bahot khoobsurat hai.. bahot pasand aaye aapke ehsasaat.... upar likhe sher se ik choti si muraad hai, kyaa aap timtimaate hue kehkasha.n se taaroN ko relate  kar rahe haiN...??

bahot acch alikha hai likhte rahiye

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