Subah wo sare khwab udheden.........mann

by mann.mann on October 10, 2012, 03:22:43 AM
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Subah wo sare khwab udheden,
jinko sari raat bunen ham.
Tute apne dil ke tukde,
khud hi apne-aap chune ham.

Roz basayen shahar naya ek,
tahas-nahas kar de fir usko,
kaise kaise sapne dekhen,
aur khud se hi roz laden ham.

Aise uljhe ham duniyan main,
ke sanse aana mushkil hai,
sukh se jine ki khatir hi,
is jivan main roz maren ham.

Dur bahut hai manzil apni,
kanton bhari dagar hai iski,
nange paon liye baithe hain,
aur chalne ki baat karen ham.

Din bhar idhar udhar pedon par,
karen parindon se baaten,
raat raat bhar jaag jaag kar,
diwaron se baat sunen ham.

Mann
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«Reply #1 on: October 10, 2012, 03:27:31 AM »
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waaah mann sahab bohut khub bohut umda peshkash ek rau apka hua
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«Reply #3 on: October 10, 2012, 03:37:34 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya saahillji.....

sath rahiyega...
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bahut bahut shukriya aarishji..... sath dete rahiye....
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shukriya saini sir....
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tarif k liye lafz kam pad rahe hain .....
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mann ji bahut hi khub bahut umda birlliant peshkash......... hazaron daad aur mubarakbaad ke sath sath aapko ek rau bhi dete hai bahut hi gajab ka qalaam pesh kiya hai aapne.........


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«Reply #11 on: October 10, 2012, 07:20:36 AM »
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Dur bahut hai manzil apni,
kanton bhari dagar hai iski,
nange paon liye baithe hain,
aur chalne ki baat karen ham.

Mann
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Subah wo sare khwab udheden,
jinko sari raat bunen ham.
Tute apne dil ke tukde,
khud hi apne-aap chune ham.

Roz basayen shahar naya ek,
tahas-nahas kar de fir usko,
kaise kaise sapne dekhen,
aur khud se hi roz laden ham.

Aise uljhe ham duniyan main,
ke sanse aana mushkil hai,
sukh se jine ki khatir hi,
is jivan main roz maren ham.

Dur bahut hai manzil apni,
kanton bhari dagar hai iski,
nange paon liye baithe hain,
aur chalne ki baat karen ham.

Din bhar idhar udhar pedon par,
karen parindon se baaten,
raat raat bhar jaag jaag kar,
diwaron se baat sunen ham.

Mann


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Subah wo sare khwab udheden,
jinko sari raat bunen ham.
Tute apne dil ke tukde,
khud hi apne-aap chune ham.

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Subah wo sare khwab udheden,
jinko sari raat bunen ham.
Tute apne dil ke tukde,
khud hi apne-aap chune ham.

Roz basayen shahar naya ek,
tahas-nahas kar de fir usko,
kaise kaise sapne dekhen,
aur khud se hi roz laden ham.

Aise uljhe ham duniyan main,
ke sanse aana mushkil hai,
sukh se jine ki khatir hi,
is jivan main roz maren ham.

Dur bahut hai manzil apni,
kanton bhari dagar hai iski,
nange paon liye baithe hain,
aur chalne ki baat karen ham.

Din bhar idhar udhar pedon par,
karen parindon se baaten,
raat raat bhar jaag jaag kar,
diwaron se baat sunen ham.

Mann
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waah gd effort mann jee,...........bohat c daad.....
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