Taish- Rishtey-Naate Sab Marr Chuke...!!

by ghayal_shayar on March 22, 2013, 02:21:19 PM
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Beta jo baap ke saath baith peeta sharaab hai,
MaiN na kehta tha zamaana bahut kharaab hai.
Rishte-naate, sanskaar, ehsaash sab marr chuke,
Is ikkishwiN sadi me aapka swagat janaab hai.


Beta maa ko suno!, pitaa ko ab baap kehtaa hai,
Kisi ne sikhaya use aisa, ya apne aap kehtaa hai.
Ye paath padhati modernisation naam ki kitaab hai,
Rishte-naate, sanskaar, ehsaash sab marr chuke,
Is ikkishwiN sadi me aapka swagat janaab hai.


Striyon ke jin rishtoN se jeevan me tha aaraam,
Ab bas gaaliyon meN sunaayi deta unka naam.
Jo de jitni gaali uska aaj-kal hota utna ruaab hai,
Rishte-naate, sanskaar, ehsaash sab marr chuke,
Is ikkishwiN sadi me aapka swagat janaab hai.


Mata-pita hi jo shikaayeN bacchon ko ye hoshiyaari,
Bhool jaa chacha, mausi, buaa aur mama ki rishtedaari.
Jaane kyuN ab hota hume in rishtoN se iztenaab hai,
Rishte-naate, sanskaar, ehsaash sab marr chuke,
Is ikkishwiN sadi me aapka swagat janaab hai.
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«Reply #1 on: March 22, 2013, 02:25:18 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: March 22, 2013, 02:46:50 PM »
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uuuufffffffff......... Taish ji ... Aaj ke mahoal ki sachchaiii bayaan karke rakh di aapne ...

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«Reply #3 on: March 22, 2013, 03:11:55 PM »
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Bohat Khub!! Yahi aaj-kal ki sachai hai!!!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: March 22, 2013, 04:04:50 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Sach ki tasveer. bahut khoob taish ji. lajawab composition. dheron daad..
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«Reply #5 on: March 22, 2013, 05:34:35 PM »
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Beta jo baap ke saath baith peeta sharaab hai,
MaiN na kehta tha zamaana bahut kharaab hai.
Rishte-naate, sanskaar, ehsaash sab marr chuke,
Is ikkishwiN sadi me aapka swagat janaab hai.


Beta maa ko suno!, pitaa ko ab baap kehtaa hai,
Kisi ne sikhaya use aisa, ya apne aap kehtaa hai.
Ye paath padhati modernisation naam ki kitaab hai,
Rishte-naate, sanskaar, ehsaash sab marr chuke,
Is ikkishwiN sadi me aapka swagat janaab hai.


Striyon ke jin rishtoN se jeevan me tha aaraam,
Ab bas gaaliyon meN sunaayi deta unka naam.
Jo de jitni gaali uska aaj-kal hota utna ruaab hai,
Rishte-naate, sanskaar, ehsaash sab marr chuke,
Is ikkishwiN sadi me aapka swagat janaab hai.


Mata-pita hi jo shikaayeN bacchon ko ye hoshiyaari,
Bhool jaa chacha, mausi, buaa aur mama ki rishtedaari.
Jaane kyuN ab hota hume in rishtoN se iztenaab hai,
Rishte-naate, sanskaar, ehsaash sab marr chuke,
Is ikkishwiN sadi me aapka swagat janaab hai.


good,sir
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«Reply #6 on: March 22, 2013, 09:33:12 PM »
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bahut khoob an inspiring creation

sir ji bahut bahut shukriya, ise padhne aur saraahne ka...
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«Reply #7 on: March 23, 2013, 01:47:43 AM »
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umda..
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«Reply #8 on: March 23, 2013, 02:54:09 AM »
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Taish Sahaab Aadaab!


Kia baat hai janab lagta hai pure taish meiN aa chuke haiN aap... Usual Smile
Badi hi gehri aur umdaa fikr kasi hai janab behad khoob ... Usual Smile

Aik achchi kalaam kahi hai aapne.. Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Bazm meiN aate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile


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«Reply #9 on: March 23, 2013, 10:27:00 AM »
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uuuufffffffff......... Taish ji ... Aaj ke mahoal ki sachchaiii bayaan karke rakh di aapne ...



kasak ji bade dinoN baad aapse mukhatib hua huN, kaisi haiN aap..?? waise jaan kar khushi hui ki aapko meri appeal dikhi usme, umeed karta huN ki aage bhi aapki hausla afzaayi yuNhi milti rahegi hume...
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«Reply #10 on: March 23, 2013, 11:00:27 PM »
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Bohat Khub!! Yahi aaj-kal ki sachai hai!!!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

haaN shireen ji isi baat ka to dukh hai ki aaj kal ki sachhayi aisi hai... sad5
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«Reply #11 on: March 24, 2013, 11:12:46 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Sach ki tasveer. bahut khoob taish ji. lajawab composition. dheron daad..

aqsh ji shukriya...!!
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«Reply #12 on: March 25, 2013, 01:48:25 AM »
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good,sir

bahayaat saaheb, shukriya, pasand karne ka.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: March 26, 2013, 02:47:35 AM »
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umda..

champak saahab jaan kar khushi hui ki aapko kosish pasand aayi, bas yuNhi saath dete raheN... Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: March 27, 2013, 03:09:12 AM »
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Taish Sahaab Aadaab!


Kia baat hai janab lagta hai pure taish meiN aa chuke haiN aap... Usual Smile
Badi hi gehri aur umdaa fikr kasi hai janab behad khoob ... Usual Smile

Aik achchi kalaam kahi hai aapne.. Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Bazm meiN aate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile




shukriya bhai, aur ab ye aate rahiye bolna bandh bhi karo, ab to kaafi waqt se regular aa raha huN maiN.... tongue3
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