Tute Phute Lakiren

by Bambi on April 09, 2009, 12:01:33 AM
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Tute phute lakiren
Ab tumhari yaad dilati hain
Jodna chahun toh bhi,
Yeh Judne se rahin

Berang si lakiren
Ab tumhari yaad dilati hain
Inme rang bharna chahun toh bhi
Yeh bharne se rahi.

Phainkh diye maine
Unn Lakiron ko
Ab inka koi vaasta nahi raha
mujse

Na Chidya ka Ghosla banta hai.
Na bachon ke khilone
Na ruthi Nani ki Soti
Na aag deenewali lakdi.

Kuch Na bana inse
Bas ek gareeb ki kavita
Kuch na bana inse
Bas ek gareeb ki kavita
     Aur chote-chote namkeen motiyan.
 
  
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«Reply #1 on: April 09, 2009, 12:04:07 AM »
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wah kaya baat hai... ek alag rang!!! Good work BAMBI!!

APKI YAH KAVITA ZINDAGI SECTION MAIN JAYADA ACHI RAHEGI... Moving in Zindagi section from Khumar-e-Ishaq
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«Reply #2 on: April 09, 2009, 12:11:12 AM »
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Hi
2 question --
1. Appko kyun lagta hai yeh zindagi section main achcha rahega ?
   (why does it belong to the zindagi section?)
2. Zindagi section main kaise shift karun ?
   (How do I shift it to the zindagi section ?)
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«Reply #3 on: April 09, 2009, 12:20:45 AM »
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Hi
2 question --
1. Appko kyun lagta hai yeh zindagi section main achcha rahega ?
   (why does it belong to the zindagi section?)
2. Zindagi section main kaise shift karun ?
   (How do I shift it to the zindagi section ?)

1. Apki kavita zindagi ke kai rango ko berang bata rahi hai... is liye yah khumar-e-Ishaq section ke liye nahi hai.. waha pyar ke rang sajaye jaate hai.... magar Zindagi section main app rang saja bhi sakte hai aor berang bhi kar sakte hai.

2. Apki thread already Zindagi section main move ho chuki hai!!

Let me know if you have any other question regarding this or Yoindia!!
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«Reply #4 on: April 09, 2009, 12:38:35 AM »
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Main thodi si kachi hoon.
Thank you very much pooja.
bambi
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«Reply #5 on: April 09, 2009, 12:55:43 AM »
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Very Nice Bambi jee...
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«Reply #6 on: April 09, 2009, 01:38:44 AM »
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Tute phute lakiren
Ab tumhari yaad dilati hain
Jodna chahun toh bhi,
Yeh Judne se rahin

Berang si lakiren
Ab tumhari yaad dilati hain
Inme rang bharna chahun toh bhi
Yeh bharne se rahi.

Phainkh diye maine
Unn Lakiron ko
Ab inka koi vaasta nahi raha
mujse

Na Chidya ka Ghosla banta hai.
Na bachon ke khilone
Na ruthi Nani ki Soti
Na aag deenewali lakdi.

Kuch Na bana inse
Bas ek gareeb ki kavita
Kuch na bana inse
Bas ek gareeb ki kavita
     Aur chote-chote namkeen motiyan.
 
 

Bohot hi Khoob Bambi Ji
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«Reply #7 on: April 09, 2009, 09:33:51 AM »
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Good work Bambi..
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«Reply #8 on: April 09, 2009, 11:15:24 AM »
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Thank you sajid ji celmiraji  & mr.deadheart.

Koi sawaal ho to zarur puchiyega ...
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«Reply #9 on: April 09, 2009, 11:16:11 AM »
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ya phir kuch galat lagta hai to bejhijak batayiega.
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«Reply #10 on: April 09, 2009, 11:18:49 AM »
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bahoot khoob Bambi ji..
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«Reply #11 on: April 09, 2009, 11:35:36 AM »
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Bahut AAcha Likha Hai Bambi Ji,

Welcome to yoindia family,

Shally.
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«Reply #12 on: April 09, 2009, 01:01:18 PM »
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Nice one Bambi Ji !!!
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«Reply #13 on: April 10, 2009, 03:13:25 PM »
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Thank you karndhar ji & shally ji
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