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Kehne ko tou ek chhota sa lafz hai,
per jine k bahut kaaam aati hai umeed,

faaslo per rehne waalo ka sath nibhati hai,
aur phir milne ki aas jagati hai umeed,

kisi khaas shakhs k bina zindgi ka guzara kahan,
kisiki geybat mein uski yado ko mehkati hai umeed,

jab kabhi lagta ho ki shayad na mil paye safar mein,
kisi na kisi bahane se kareeb le aati hai umeed,

kabhi waqt kaate na kate aur sab kuch beimana sa lage,
tab ek alag hi ehsas banke dilo mein jagmati hai umeed,

isliye merre yaaro hamesha umeed ka daaman thaame rakho..
der se hi sahi per sache yaar se zarur milwati hai umeed.........




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«Reply #1 on: November 06, 2010, 02:26:04 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: November 06, 2010, 02:36:22 PM »
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Shukriya shihab ji n kasak ji...
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«Reply #3 on: November 06, 2010, 07:26:49 PM »
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BBL jee Aadaab!


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Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe daad hazir hai .....


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«Reply #4 on: November 06, 2010, 07:52:19 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut khoob..
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«Reply #5 on: November 06, 2010, 07:55:22 PM »
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BBL ji. Apki "umeed" waqayi tareef ke qabil hai.
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«Reply #6 on: November 07, 2010, 07:14:56 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: November 07, 2010, 08:02:42 PM »
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Wonderfully expressed the value of Hope......Geet-di liked very much.....
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Har roj subah se sham hoti hai,puri nahi hoti unse milne ki umeed
Aur yu he beet rahe hai mere jeevan kay behtareen din liye umeed

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«Reply #8 on: November 08, 2010, 08:17:54 PM »
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Bahut bahut bahut shukriya parwaaz ji,dev,koyal,zarra aur rahiim ji dil se shukriya apka...
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«Reply #9 on: November 08, 2010, 08:53:15 PM »
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Kehne ko tou ek chhota sa lafz hai,
per jine k bahut kaaam aati hai umeed,

faaslo per rehne waalo ka sath nibhati hai,
aur phir milne ki aas jagati hai umeed,

kisi khaas shakhs k bina zindgi ka guzara kahan,
kisiki geybat mein uski yado ko mehkati hai umeed,

jab kabhi lagta ho ki shayad na mil paye safar mein,
kisi na kisi bahane se kareeb le aati hai umeed,

kabhi waqt kaate na kate aur sab kuch beimana sa lage,
tab ek alag hi ehsas banke dilo mein jagmati hai umeed,

isliye merre yaaro hamesha umeed ka daaman thaame rakho..
der se hi sahi per sache yaar se zarur milwati hai umeed.........






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«Reply #10 on: November 08, 2010, 09:21:53 PM »
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Eh layo enna kuch kehke vi keh rahe ho ki tarif vich ki likha hor kuch kehen di lod nhi mainu khushi hai ki tuanu te sa members nu merre kaam pasand aanda hai,sath den da bahut shukriya..rab raakha...
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Eh layo enna kuch kehke vi keh rahe ho ki tarif vich ki likha hor kuch kehen di lod nhi mainu khushi hai ki tuanu te sa members nu merre kaam pasand aanda hai,sath den da bahut shukriya..rab raakha...

Tussi kehnde Ho te chup Ho Jaana,Nahi Taa Main Te Socheya Si ki Tareef karda rawa.. tongue3

geetji, Jo Dil To likhda Hai,Usdi lekhni Sab Nu Zaroor Pasand Aandi hai..

T.c Rab raakha!!!!!! icon_flower
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Tussi kehnde Ho te chup Ho Jaana,Nahi Taa Main Te Socheya Si ki Tareef karda rawa.. tongue3

geetji, Jo Dil To likhda Hai,Usdi lekhni Sab Nu Zaroor Pasand Aandi hai..

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Bahut bahut shukriya ji..sath dende rahiye...u too take care...
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«Reply #13 on: November 09, 2010, 02:10:31 PM »
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wah geet di umed aunti itna sara ka  karti hain mujhe aaj pata chala..

really a good one..

likhte rahiye,,

dhers sarii daad
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«Reply #14 on: November 10, 2010, 03:21:03 PM »
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wah geet di umed aunti itna sara ka  karti hain mujhe aaj pata chala..

really a good one..

likhte rahiye,,

dhers sarii daad

He he he thnx alot abhi...
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