USE AAP KYA KAHOGE?[GUNEHGAAR]

by gunehgaar on May 05, 2009, 09:55:13 PM
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salaam walekum dosto, bahat dino baad kuch likhu yeh hosla jutayi, ummed hai accha lagega...

Dard se nikli awaaz mein, beshaq ek kashish hoti hai,
Par jo dard ko awaaz bana le, use kya kahoge?
Ghutan se nikli ehesaaso mein, beshaq ek taklif hoti hai,
Par jo ghutan ko aapna humdard bana le, use kya kahoge?
Chalte chalte ladkhadayi kadme beshaq hosla dhundte hai,
Par jo bina chale hi ladkhara jaye, use kya kahoge?
Udaasi se jo akelapan badhti hai, beshaq use hum nazar andaaz karte hai,
Par jo akelepan ko aapna hatiyar bana le, use aap kya kahoge?
Tadap se jo nikalti hai aah, beshaq wo gumo ka tufaan ubhar lata hai,
Par jo aapni tadap ko aapna nasib bana le,use aap kya kahoge?
Jindagi beshaq saji hai  bahat sare rango se, kabhi khushi kabhi to gum hai,
Par aapna kar vi jo jindagi se rista tore, har rango se nata tore, use aap kya kahoge?
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«Reply #1 on: May 05, 2009, 09:59:41 PM »
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Bohot Khoob likha hai Gunehgaar Ji
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«Reply #2 on: May 06, 2009, 09:01:15 AM »
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Walekum salaam,gunhegaar ji,very nice,
dil se nikli hui awaaz mein kitna dard hota hai.bahut khoob.
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«Reply #3 on: May 06, 2009, 09:37:51 AM »
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  bhut %Ub gunehgar jI         
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«Reply #4 on: May 06, 2009, 02:32:14 PM »
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Bahut achhe Gunehgaar ji  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #5 on: May 06, 2009, 02:41:26 PM »
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wah Gunehgar ji.. bahoot khoob likha hai
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