Utha kalam apni

by Rahi2001 on July 23, 2010, 10:50:21 AM
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agar dil ho tera kharab ya kuch dard mann me ho
utha kalam apni use aawaj bana le

kahin pe chhot khai ho ya kahin pe jakhm gahra ho
likhde shabdon me inko tu ek saaaj bana le

kabhi jo ho akela tu, aur ghan-ghor andhera ho
jala shabdon ke dipon ko roshan ek jahan bana le

kahin ho dard-e-mahfil, ya viraan ye duniya ho
in shabdon ko tu hoton pe uth aur apne saja le

ye mahaj kuch shabd nahi sari duniya-e-hqikat hai
chala shbdon ke tiron ko unhe hi kamaan bana le

gar kar sakta hai tu ye sab to hqikat khwaab har hongy
bas uth kar ho taiyar aur sabko aawaj laga le

dekh kitni betartibi bikhri hai is jahan me
de pyaar ke do shabd is jaha.n ko zama le

nahi koi bhi rok pata hai is vaar-e-shabdon ko
bana hathiyar shabdon ke ,gunahgaron ko ghayal bana le

nikal ja sath shabdon ke ban ja "Rahi" nirala tu
badal de is *jamane ko sabko apna bana le
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«Reply #1 on: July 24, 2010, 07:08:45 AM »
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agar dil ho tera kharab ya kuch dard mann me ho
utha kalam apni use aawaj bana le

kahin pe chhot khai ho ya kahin pe jakhm gahra ho
likhde shabdon me inko tu ek saaaj bana le

kabhi jo ho akela tu, aur ghan-ghor andhera ho
jala shabdon ke dipon ko roshan ek jahan bana le

kahin ho dard-e-mahfil, ya viraan ye duniya ho
in shabdon ko tu hoton pe uth aur apne saja le

ye mahaj kuch shabd nahi sari duniya-e-hqikat hai
chala shbdon ke tiron ko unhe hi kamaan bana le

gar kar sakta hai tu ye sab to hqikat khwaab har hongy
bas uth kar ho taiyar aur sabko aawaj laga le

dekh kitni betartibi bikhri hai is jahan me
de pyaar ke do shabd is jaha.n ko zama le

nahi koi bhi rok pata hai is vaar-e-shabdon ko
bana hathiyar shabdon ke ,gunahgaron ko ghayal bana le

nikal ja sath shabdon ke ban ja "Rahi" nirala tu
badal de is *jamane ko sabko apna bana le
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Bahut hi umdaa khayal......Rahi Ji ....bahut khoob !
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«Reply #2 on: July 24, 2010, 07:11:24 AM »
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Bahut hi umdaa khayal......Rahi Ji ....bahut khoob !

shukriya anshumali ji
aaiye swagat hai aap ka
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«Reply #3 on: August 01, 2010, 01:58:46 PM »
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beautiful poem raahi ji....
sach me aapki ye kavita ne kalam uthane ko majbur kar diya.....
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«Reply #4 on: August 18, 2010, 10:47:37 AM »
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Bahut achchhi poetry hai janab ye aapki Rahi2001 ji. HazaaroN daad qubul kijiye.

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agar dil ho tera kharab ya kuch dard mann me ho
utha kalam apni use aawaj bana le

kahin pe chhot khai ho ya kahin pe jakhm gahra ho
likhde shabdon me inko tu ek saaaj bana le

kabhi jo ho akela tu, aur ghan-ghor andhera ho
jala shabdon ke dipon ko roshan ek jahan bana le

kahin ho dard-e-mahfil, ya viraan ye duniya ho
in shabdon ko tu hoton pe uth aur apne saja le

ye mahaj kuch shabd nahi sari duniya-e-hqikat hai
chala shbdon ke tiron ko unhe hi kamaan bana le

gar kar sakta hai tu ye sab to hqikat khwaab har hongy
bas uth kar ho taiyar aur sabko aawaj laga le

dekh kitni betartibi bikhri hai is jahan me
de pyaar ke do shabd is jaha.n ko zama le

nahi koi bhi rok pata hai is vaar-e-shabdon ko
bana hathiyar shabdon ke ,gunahgaron ko ghayal bana le

nikal ja sath shabdon ke ban ja "Rahi" nirala tu
badal de is *jamane ko sabko apna bana le
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