vo bol kahan se lau me

by neha verma on June 25, 2012, 09:40:49 AM
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Vo Bol kahan se lau me
Utaru kese un lamhon ko in panno per
jab shabd hi na ho batane ko
ye soch k aaj bethi hu kuch dil se gungunane ko
vo bol kaha se lau me jo behlade
sbke tanman ko
ik 'raah' hu me usk jeevan ki
chal pado to paawan ho jau me
un pattharon se lad jau me
fir bankar dhool pero ki
seene se usk lg jau me
vo 'raag' kaha se lau me jo ched de
Indradhanushi rang rupi sawan ko
aisa hunar kaha se lau me
hai koshish ye ek choti c
apne vicharo ko prastut krne ki
hai shuruaat abhi is munch per
hai manzil meri door abhi
jb sabke dilon ko harshau me
vo bol kahan se lau me
    vo shabd kahan se lau me
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«Reply #1 on: June 25, 2012, 10:10:17 AM »
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bahut khoob Neha ji hardik daad qubool karen
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«Reply #2 on: June 25, 2012, 07:11:41 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: June 26, 2012, 04:35:19 PM »
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bahut hi khubsurat qalaam.......... bahut  badhiya........ Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: August 08, 2012, 04:11:30 PM »
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thanx everyone m really grateful to all of u for appreciating me
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«Reply #5 on: August 08, 2012, 04:13:35 PM »
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aap apne qeemti waqt se thoda samay yoindia ke liye bhi nikaliya kijiye.... taki hum aapki soch aapke qalaaam se avgat ho sakein...
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«Reply #6 on: September 10, 2012, 04:12:16 PM »
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very very impresive ghazal boht khub neha
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