~~Yahan ki Zindagi~~ (Shikha)

by Shikha12 on March 05, 2007, 11:09:08 AM
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एक सर्द रात, ठिठुराती हुई सर्दी, और वोही बेबसी,
बेबस से साए अपनी ज़िंदगी का बोझ ढोते हुए…
एक ही कंबल मे दुबके  हुए तीन-चार बच्चे,
गरमाहट के लिए अपने हाथों से हाथ मलते हुए…

जलता हुआ अलाव और उसके इर्द-गिर्द जमा हुआ मेला,
कुछ झोपडे टूटी छत से खुद को ढाकते हुए…
ओस की हर एक बूँद से सिहरते जिस्म कुम्हलाए से,
और कुछ मासूम एक रोटी के टुकड़ों को बाँटते हुए…

टूटती हुई चप्पल से पैरों को छुपाता एक चेहरा,
धुंध के बीच धुंधलाती ज़िंदगी को झाँकते हुए,
अपने आप मे रह रह सिमटता हुआ एक बीमार सा जिस्म,
और पैबंद लगे बिछौने पे एक बुजुर्ग को काँपते हुए…

वक़्त की झुर्रियों को खुद से लपेटे ममता की मूरत,
भूख से बेहाल हुए अपने बच्चों को समझाते हुए,
खाली बर्तनों को टटोलती हुई खाली खाली सी नज़र,
जैसे किसी लपलपाते जलजले को आँखों मे रोकते हुए…

बेदम करती रही रात भर किसी को खाँसी की खनक,
और थकी थकी आती रही कहीं से घुघरू की झनक…
खौफनाक लगा हमको यूँ हर इंसान का चेहरा यहाँ,
मुरझाई हँसी को देखा हमने खून के आँसू रोते हुए…

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Ek Sard raat, thithuraatii hui sardii, aur wohi bebasii
Bebass se saaye apni zindagi ka bojh dhhotey hue…
Ek hi kambal mey dubke hue teen-chaar bachhe,
Garmaahat ke liye apne hathon se haath maltey hue…

Jaltaa hua alaaw aur uske ird-gird jama hua melaa,
Kuch jhhopadey tutti chatt se khud ko dhaakte hue…
Oas ki har ek boond sey sihartey jism kumhlaye se,
Aur kuch maasoom ek roti ke tukdon ko baatt tey hue…

Tutti hui chappal sey pairon ko chhupaata ek chehraa,
Dhund ke beech dhudhalaati zindagi ko jhaankte hue,
Apne aap mey reh reh simatt.taa hua ek bimaar sa jism,
Aur Paiband lage bichhone pe ek bujurg ko kaanpte hue…

Waqt ki jhuuriyon ko khud se lapete mamta ki moorat,
Bhookh se behaal hue apne bachon ko samjhaate hue,
Khaalii bartanon ko tattoltii huii khaalii khaalii si nazar,
Jaise kisii laplapaate jaljale ko aankhon mey rokte hue…

Bedum kartii rahii raat bhar kisii ko khaansii ki khanak,
Aur Thakii Thakii aati rahi kahin sey ghughroo ki jhanak…
Khaufnaak laga humko yun harr insaan ka chehra yahan,
Murjhaayii Hansii ko dekha hamne khoon ke aansuu rote hue…
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«Reply #1 on: March 05, 2007, 12:12:59 PM »
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Nice feeling Shikha di.. Its really nice....
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«Reply #2 on: March 05, 2007, 12:21:07 PM »
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Thanks a lot Divya for liking it... Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: March 05, 2007, 04:30:33 PM »
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wah wah wah Shikha, bahoot hi jabardast likha hai,,, jitani tareef karu kam hoga!!

bahoot hi acha likha hai!!! very emotional@!! very touching!!
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«Reply #4 on: March 06, 2007, 04:24:29 AM »
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WOW....really bahut accha likha hai SHIKHA.... =D>  =D>  =D>
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«Reply #5 on: March 06, 2007, 07:12:39 AM »
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wah !! bahut hi sunder likha hai shikha ...very nice words ..and very touching .... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: March 06, 2007, 07:19:14 AM »
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bahut hi emotional hai ye shikha ....

bahut accha likha hai

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Shikha12
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«Reply #7 on: March 08, 2007, 09:21:41 AM »
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Thanks a lot, Pooja di, Gaurav, Ranju di and Ankur...
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Talat
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«Reply #8 on: March 09, 2007, 09:50:05 PM »
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Very beautiful and touching poem Shikha...liked it so much...Its so sad sad5
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Shikha12
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«Reply #9 on: March 10, 2007, 06:04:32 AM »
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Yeah Talat... It is Sad... sad5

Thanks a lot for Appreciation...
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«Reply #10 on: November 01, 2007, 08:28:36 AM »
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Bhaoot khob Sikha Ji.  Achi samjh hai Zindagi ki !!!!

Pradeep


Quote from: "Shikha12"

Ek Sard raat, thithuraatii hui sardii, aur wohi bebasii
Bebass se saaye apni zindagi ka bhoj dhhotey hue…
Ek hi kambal mey dubke hue teen-chaar bachhe,
Garmaahat ke liye apne hathon se haath maltey hue…

Jaltaa hua alaaw aur uske ird-gird jama hua melaa,
Kuch jhhopadey tutti chatt se khud ko dhaakte hue…
Oas ki har ek boond sey sihartey jism kumhlaye se,
Aur kuch maasoom ek roti ke tukdon ko baatt tey hue…

Tutti hui chappal sey pairon ko chhupaata ek chehraa,
Dhund ke beech dhudhalaati zindagi ko jhaankte hue,
Apne aap mey reh reh simatt.taa hua ek bimaar sa jism,
Aur Paiband lage bichhone pe ek bujurg ko kaanpte hue…

Waqt ki jhuuriyon ko khud se lapete mamta ki moorat,
Bhookh se behaal hue apne bachon ko samjhaate hue,
Khaalii bartanon ko tattoltii huii khaalii khaalii si nazar,
Jaise kisii laplapaate jaljale ko aankhon mey rokte hue…

Bedum kartii rahii raat bhar kisii ko khaansii ki khanak,
Aur Thakii Thakii aati rahi kahin sey ghughroo ki jhanak…
Khaufnaak laga humko yun harr insaan ka chehra yahan,
Murjhaayii Hansii ko dekha jab khoon ke aansuu rote hue…
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«Reply #11 on: November 01, 2007, 07:21:33 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB..MAYUSI AUR BEBASI KA EHSAAS HUA PADH KE..
BAHUT HI KHOOB =D>  =D>  =D>
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«Reply #12 on: November 01, 2007, 09:21:10 PM »
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Shikha

Yeh kab likh diya tumne Puzzled !

Nazar he nahi padi is thread par !

Bahut achche !

Thanks to pradeep for bringing it up again :D
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«Reply #13 on: November 23, 2007, 08:05:04 PM »
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Bhaoot khob Sikha Ji.  Achi samjh hai Zindagi ki !!!!

Pradeep


Achhi samajh to nahin hai, Lekin koshish ki hai samajhne ki... Usual Smile

Thanks a lot Pradeep, for appreciation and for bringing back this thread in Life... Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: November 23, 2007, 08:06:34 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB..MAYUSI AUR BEBASI KA EHSAAS HUA PADH KE..
BAHUT HI KHOOB =D>  =D>  =D>


Thanks a lot Khwaish... Usual Smile
I appreciate your views...
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