Ye kaisi naali ke keede jaisi insaano ki zindagi ho gayi

by @Kaash on October 21, 2013, 04:49:10 AM
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Ye kaisi naali ke keede jaisi insaano ki zindagi ho gayi
Duniya se kyunkar aakhir insaaniyat kho gayi

Hawas o vahshat o dahshat me rahne ki aadat daal li
ilm ki roshni sabse kharaab shay ho gayi

jiwan hai paani ka bulbula jaane kab khatm ho jaaye
jaankar bhi yaaron insaan ki mati kho gayi
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«Reply #1 on: October 21, 2013, 05:36:43 AM »
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insaan jab kevel apne sukh ki sochta aur dusro ko dukh dene lagata hai to use ek cheez yaad rakhni chahiye use jina to isi duniya mai hai...
aur ye duniya bahut soondar hai
kharabi vaha aati hai jaha use lagata hai achhe raste par chalkar kuchh nahi milta lekin ye such nahi hai
such  to  ye hai bure raste par chalkar kuchh nahi milta. aur kai baar to use pata hi nahi chalta vo achha kar raha hai ya bura zindgi aisi hi hai ho sake to kisi ka bura mat karo shayad vo insaan bhi tumhare sath achha hi kare......I think kaash jee aap  aise topic late ho theek hai par aap better way choono mai bhi is baat ke sakt khilaf hoo par maine tarika dusra hai bura mat manna mera tarika hai achhi bate karke achhchhai ka ahsaas karke kyuki iski hi unhe zaroorat hai....bura mat manna

keep it on mai aapke sath hoo....
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«Reply #2 on: October 21, 2013, 02:05:45 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: October 21, 2013, 03:09:07 PM »
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very nice
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«Reply #4 on: October 21, 2013, 06:02:28 PM »
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Bahut achcha likhe ho kaash ji... daaaaaad qubool kare...
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«Reply #5 on: October 21, 2013, 06:20:48 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: October 21, 2013, 09:18:28 PM »
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bahot khoooob, dheron daaaan  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: October 22, 2013, 07:44:15 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
GUUUUUUUUUD KAASH JI
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