““ye saali zindagi””

by nirala on April 14, 2011, 02:12:00 PM
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““
kaisi ye mayusi hai
     kaisa hai ye sunaapan
chehre par na khusi koi
     na pahle sa bakpan
berukh si hai ‘ye saali zindagi’
     sahi na jaaye ab ye tadpann
aarzoo hai ab maut ki
     thamm jaaye dil ki dhadkan
dil soona jag soona soona hai ye aasmaa
     kar de ab zism ko nir maut ke hi samarpan
sad5sad5sad5
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«Reply #1 on: April 14, 2011, 02:14:43 PM »
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hmmmmmmmmmm.........
nice one.......
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«Reply #2 on: April 14, 2011, 02:24:37 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: April 14, 2011, 02:35:51 PM »
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““
kaisi ye mayusi hai
     kaisa hai ye sunaapan
chehre par na khusi koi
     na pahle sa bakpan
berukh si hai ‘ye saali zindagi’
     sahi na jaaye ab ye tadpann
aarzoo hai ab maut ki
     thamm jaaye dil ki dhadkan
dil soona jag soona soona hai ye aasmaa
     kar de ab zism ko nir maut ke hi samarpan
sad5sad5sad5


kyo tu itna udaas hai dost,

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«Reply #4 on: April 14, 2011, 02:48:09 PM »
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rangeeniyat ke soone baazaar me
kuch na mila iss khokhle sansaar me

jise dekho wahi laga hai zazbaato ke vyapaar me
ji chahe ab sama jau mai bhi ik ‘mazaar’ me
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«Reply #5 on: April 14, 2011, 02:55:45 PM »
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rangeeniyat ke soone baazaar me
kuch na mila iss khokhle sansaar me

jise dekho wahi laga hai zazbaato ke vyapaar me
ji chahe ab sama jau mai bhi ik ‘mazaar’ me

bahut khoob per kyon yaar?Huh?Huh?Huh??
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«Reply #6 on: April 14, 2011, 02:59:25 PM »
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““
kaisi ye mayusi hai
     kaisa hai ye sunaapan
chehre par na khusi koi
     na pahle sa bakpan
berukh si hai ‘ye saali zindagi’
     sahi na jaaye ab ye tadpann
aarzoo hai ab maut ki
     thamm jaaye dil ki dhadkan
dil soona jag soona soona hai ye aasmaa
     kar de ab zism ko nir maut ke hi samarpan
sad5sad5sad5

bahut khoob nirala ji pehli baar apki kisi kavita ki laye ekdum perfect hai words ki rhyming ekdum thik hai.bahut khoob...
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«Reply #7 on: April 14, 2011, 03:09:05 PM »
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geet……
kuch bato ko chupakar dil me
jaana padta hai naaadaano sa, mehfil me
shayro sa likh to lu mai bhi par
kya faida…
kuch daad bator to lu mai bhi par
kya faida………………!!!

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«Reply #8 on: April 14, 2011, 03:19:22 PM »
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geet……
kuch bato ko chupakar dil me
jaana padta hai naaadaano sa, mehfil me
shayro sa likh to lu mai bhi par
kya faida…
kuch daad bator to lu mai bhi par
kya faida………………!!!

thanx


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«Reply #9 on: April 15, 2011, 10:29:39 AM »
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bht accha likha hai nrala ji..
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