!!!!! Yeh Faasle !!!!!!

by neelgold on May 20, 2010, 09:16:48 PM
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«Reply #30 on: May 25, 2010, 04:59:22 PM »
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«Reply #31 on: May 25, 2010, 11:09:06 PM »
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Hey Rahim Really have no words to say Thanks .......

U guys jst moved me .......

Tons tons of thanks That you guys cum upfront & supported me so very well .........(U, Kapil, MAdhu, Cara & all who supprtd me)

Sachi thnks Dil se

Muze jaida kehna nahi aata bt hope u vll feel it dil se dua de rehi hoon aapko .........

Quote from: -Rahim- on May 24, 2010, 10:35:51 PM
Neel Dost, Ager ap chali jayengi toh bahaut dukh hoga mujhe aur Kapil Dost ko bhi..Ap likte rahiye...Aksar aisa hota hai ke meri koi likhi hui kalam ko utna support aur tariff nahin milti jitni main umeed karta hoon mager iska yeh matlab nahin ke hum likhna chorr dein...

Meri teh dil se guzarish hai, ke ap na jaen...Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee na jaen...Plz!!!
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«Reply #32 on: May 25, 2010, 11:12:17 PM »
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Thanx a lot Cara ji....... really i mean it ...

Thanks for your kind words......

Haar jeet vaha dekhte hai jaha war hoti hai yaha v jst share our feelings nothing else so thr's no point of that......
yeh baat sahi hai kissi ko samz ati hai feelings kissi ko nahi ....

bt thnx a lotttttttt.........


Quote from: cara on May 25, 2010, 02:46:15 AM
WAH BAHUT HI KHOOB     .    NEELGOLD JI.....

HAMNE KAB KAHA YE NAZM HAI-HAMNE KAB KAHA YE GHAZAL HAI
KYUN LARD RAHE HO AAPAS MEH KYUN BANA RAHE HO "YE FAASLE"
KUCH DIL KI BAATEN THI  KYA GUNHA KIYA JO HAMNE LIKH LIYE....


LIKHTE RAHO LIKHTE RAHO KABHI HAAR SWEEKAR NA KARO
KYA MALUM NAZM AUR GHAZAL KE ALAWA
TUM KUCH NAYA AAWISHKAR KARO...
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«Reply #33 on: May 25, 2010, 11:14:01 PM »
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Madhu ji really so sweet of u.........
Thanksssssssssssssss

I know that but let them enjoy........

Quote from: madhuwesh on May 25, 2010, 04:54:35 AM
Neel ji aap kisike mat suniye,aapke dil mein jo aaye likh.aap bahut khoobsurti se likhti hai.no one puts the food on your table.aur yo chod ke mat jana pliz,hum sab aapke saath hai.God bless you. love4 :love9:tke care
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«Reply #34 on: May 25, 2010, 11:17:29 PM »
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Kapil ..................

Thanks a lot but i really dnt need that...............
Its simply OK .............
DOnt worry about anything ......
But really thanks a lottttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
Thnx 4 ur all help & support ......

Kissi ke hone ya na hone se kya fark padta hai yaha itne members hai ek do kum ho jaye kya farak padta hai ........

But thnx 4 ur concern...........chalo Yo ne kuch ache logon se to milvaya ....THanks t o YO....................

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«Reply #35 on: May 25, 2010, 11:29:43 PM »
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Ab aap aisi baat karoge? Pehle to aap ye kehte the........

http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shayriedard/dil-aur-kalam-t55204.0.html;msg1020879#msg1020879
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«Reply #36 on: May 25, 2010, 11:38:19 PM »
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Thanx for reminding me KApil

Yh Im lyk tht ..Hum kissi se kum nahi ......
Bt logon ko khush kar rehi hoon let thm b happy na ........

Quote from: klaskar on May 25, 2010, 11:29:43 PM
Ab aap aisi baat karoge? Pehle to aap ye kehte the........

http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shayriedard/dil-aur-kalam-t55204.0.html;msg1020879#msg1020879
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«Reply #37 on: May 25, 2010, 11:41:02 PM »
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No ways... logo me hum bhi aate hain aur hum khush nahi hain.... sad5
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«Reply #38 on: May 26, 2010, 12:16:18 AM »
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NEEL JI MAI TO HAIRAN HOON YE HANGAMA DEKH KAR
TUMKO QASAM HAI YO KO NA YOON JANA CHOR KAR
JO KUCH BHI HO GAYA YAHAN KHUSH RAHNA BHOOL KAR
HAMSE HI HAI YE YO KA ZAMANA QUBOOL KAR
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«Reply #39 on: May 28, 2010, 11:17:20 AM »
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bahut hi umda likha hai neel ji... kafi pasand aaya hume..
thx ke aap gaye nahi aur humaare sath ab bhi ho...kapil ji aur baaki members ka bhi shukriya jo aap logo ne neel ji ko samjhaya aur sanbhala
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«Reply #40 on: August 30, 2010, 07:47:54 AM »
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neel ji....ye puri thread padhi aaj maine....har ek views ,,har ek ki feelings har ek dost jo aapke sath hai..aapne unn sabko hara diya ek jhatke me

ek insaan aapse ye bola k use aapki likhi baat sahi nahin lagi...wo sahi ho gaya aur jo dost aapko padhna chahte hain aapki feelings samjhte hain aapko samjhte hain wo jhute ho gaye galat ho gaye....

wo jo aapke rights k liye lad rahe hain bol rahe hain unki feelings ko nazar andaaz karke aap chale gaye....kya sochkar k baki logon ka achcha kar rahe ho...

jinhone aapko criticze kiya unko kuch aata hai kuch samjhte hain unhone aapko apni baat kahi thik hai keh di...lekin usko kisi aur ne galat kaha kyunki uski knowldge me wo  sahi hai..ye unn dono jaankaaron ki ladai thi...do guni log aapas me bahas karte lekin aap kyun gaye....

aapke dost aapke chahne walon ka dil todkar,,,kais ja sake aap...
main aapko nahin janti na aapki feelings samjh sakti hun...lekin haan ye pata hai k aap haarne walon me se nahin hain...jitna aapko padha hai jitna samjha hai...neel aap iss tarah nahin  ja sakti thi...

aaj bhi hum sab aapka wait karr rahe hain...yahan yo me aapke apne ghar me aapke apne group me plz laut aaiye...
aap likhiye jinko problm hai wo nahin padhenge aapki poem lekin jinko aapko padhna achcha lagta hai aapki style achchi lagti hai unhe kyun maun karte ho....

aap sabko khush dekhna chahte ho aur aap apne hi doston ko dukhi kar gaye...hara gaye..aajaiye aaj hum sab k liye kapil rahim cara madhuji sb k liye wapas yahan hamar bich....

plzzzzzzzzz ....we need u here wid us ....plz neel ji..jo kaha hai ek bar thande dimag se sochiyega..and try k aap aajayen aur fir usi andaaz me lkhen..
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«Reply #41 on: August 30, 2010, 07:49:44 AM »
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Thank you so much Kasak ji...!!! Hope she comes back...!!!
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«Reply #42 on: August 30, 2010, 07:54:42 AM »
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Haan laut aao Dost.!
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«Reply #43 on: August 30, 2010, 10:14:04 AM »
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Neel-di.....neela sona ho aap baddi-di....
Paarkhee he pehchaan payega....
Ye Peele rang k moh mai atke log kya jaane....
Ye tou ussi lakeer ko peet-te jo unhain maaloom hai....
Kyaa haal hain Texas ke...?
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«Reply #44 on: August 30, 2010, 11:30:32 AM »
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Quote from: neelgold on May 20, 2010, 09:16:48 PM
Tum se mil ke bhi kyun hum tum se na miley
kyun ab taak hai hum main yeh milon ke faasle

Shikayatein nahi hai ab zindagi se mujhe koi
Kyun fir bhi ab tak hai mujhe tum se kai Giley

Tanhayion ki chaadar odh ke so gaye hum tum
Kyun hum ne na tode aaj talak yeh silsile

Aahat bhi koi hoti hai to lagta hai ki tum ho
Kyun ab tak hai seene main yeh zalzale

Voh ek nazuk dor ka rista jode hai hume aj bhi
Par fir Kyun hai abhi taak Hum main yeh Fasle.......


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neel jiiiiiiiiii

mai aap ko jyada nahi janta par ek baat bataon jitna aap ke bare me rahim sir aur kalkar(kapil) ji se suna mujhe b aap ki kami lagne lagi

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz wapas aajaooooooooo aap ki jarurat hai hamen

aap ki is post pe ek chota reply dal  ke mai aap ko manane ki koshish kar raha hu ho sake to chhota bhi samajh kar maaf kar dena aur aajana wapas yahan par ham sab aap ko miss kar rahe hai

misssssssss u neel ji(di)

aao mil jao aise ke dur ho na payen
bhale ho jayen milon ke fasle dur ho na payen

na kar gila-shikwa tu jindagi se
mai dunga itna prem tujhe ki har dard dab jayengy

mai chhin longa tanhayon ko teri
dil me chupa dunga tujhe aise,wo dhundh nahi payengy

har ghadi tujhe dunga ek ehsas naya
tere dil ki dhadakan ko ham giton me gungunayengy

nahi hai bhut najuk ye rishton ki door hamari
mil jaye ye jahan sara to bhi ise tod nahi payengy

ke lout ke aaja yahan tera intajaar hai "neel"
har "Raahi" teri raah pe phool barsayengy
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