zaayaa.......A.B

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                     salaamat-e-aan  ke  liye  jaan  lagaa  baithe...,
                     hujjat-o-bahas   pe   dhayaan   lagaa  baithe...,
 
                     hai  muflisi  ka  sayaa  tamaan  ghar pe mere...,
                     khaamakhaa loag ameeri ka gumaan lagaa baithe...,

                     jazbaa  millat  ke ibtedaa ki rakhte nahin hum...,
                     bus halaat-e-dushman pe  kaan   lagaa   baithe...,

                     raushan-e-qalb   ki  joostju   mein  nahin  koi...,
                     her  ek pather pe emaarat ki shaan lagaa baithe...,

                     hai  khareed-o-farokht  dahshat  ki   chaar-soo...,
                     miyaan  bechain mohabbar ki dukaan lagaa baithe...,
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«Reply #1 on: October 21, 2012, 05:35:32 PM »
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                     salaamat-e-aan  ke  liye  jaan  lagaa  baithe...,
                     hujjat-o-bahas   pe   dhayaan   lagaa  baithe...,
 
                     hai  muflisi  ka  sayaa  tamaan  ghar pe mere...,
                     khaamakhaa loag ameeri ka gumaan lagaa baithe...,

                     jazbaa  millat  ke ibtedaa ki rakhte nahin hum...,
                     bus halaat-e-dushman pe  kaan   lagaa   baithe...,

                     raushan-e-qalb   ki  joostju   mein  nahin  koi...,
                     her  ek pather pe emaarat ki shaan lagaa baithe...,

                     hai  khareed-o-farokht  dahshat  ki   chaar-soo...,
                     miyaan  bechain mohabbar ki dukaan lagaa baithe...,
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«Reply #2 on: October 21, 2012, 05:48:12 PM »
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Hai muflisi ka saaya..Applause Applause

bahut khoob adil bhai Applause
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«Reply #3 on: October 22, 2012, 12:31:49 AM »
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waah waah nahut sunder dheron daad aur mubarak baad
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«Reply #4 on: October 22, 2012, 12:35:52 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: October 22, 2012, 01:27:30 AM »
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                     salaamat-e-aan  ke  liye  jaan  lagaa  baithe...,
                     hujjat-o-bahas   pe   dhayaan   lagaa  baithe...,
waah adil bhaai waah
                     hai  muflisi  ka  sayaa  tamaan  ghar pe mere...,
                     khaamakhaa loag ameeri ka gumaan lagaa baithe...,

HaaN aap bahut amiir gariib ho.
Ghar pe 2-2 BMW kharii hai, aur Adil MiyaaN aelaan kar raheN hai ki maiN gariib hoN.

                     jazbaa  millat  ke ibtedaa ki rakhte nahin hum...,
                     bus halaat-e-dushman pe aksar kaan lagaa baithe...,
Applause
                     raushan-e-qalb   ki  joostju   mein  nahin  koi...,
                     her  ek pather pe emaarat ki shaan lagaa baithe...,
ApplauseApplause
                     hai  khareed-o-farokht  dahshat  ki   chaar-soo...,
                     miyaan  bechain mohabbar ki dukaan lagaa baithe...,
Ha ha ha

Adil bhaai ekdam jhakaas gazal likhii hai aapne. Mubarakbaad kabool kareN.
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«Reply #6 on: October 22, 2012, 01:59:05 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
Excellant  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #7 on: October 22, 2012, 02:14:23 AM »
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bohut khoob adil ji. umda ghazal hai........mubarakbad qubool kareN....
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«Reply #8 on: October 22, 2012, 02:48:48 AM »
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waah waah waah Adil ji bahut khoob....
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«Reply #9 on: October 22, 2012, 03:21:09 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut khoob adilji
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«Reply #10 on: October 22, 2012, 04:43:53 AM »
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«Reply #11 on: October 22, 2012, 06:14:15 AM »
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Shandaar A,B ji ...kya kehnay


                     salaamat-e-aan  ke  liye  jaan  lagaa  baithe...,
                     hujjat-o-bahas   pe   dhayaan   lagaa  baithe...,
 
                     hai  muflisi  ka  sayaa  tamaan  ghar pe mere...,
                     khaamakhaa loag ameeri ka gumaan lagaa baithe...,

                     jazbaa  millat  ke ibtedaa ki rakhte nahin hum...,
                     bus halaat-e-dushman pe aksar kaan lagaa baithe...,

                     raushan-e-qalb   ki  joostju   mein  nahin  koi...,
                     her  ek pather pe emaarat ki shaan lagaa baithe...,

                     hai  khareed-o-farokht  dahshat  ki   chaar-soo...,
                     miyaan  bechain mohabbar ki dukaan lagaa baithe...,

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«Reply #12 on: October 22, 2012, 12:45:10 PM »
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Hai muflisi ka saaya..Applause Applause

bahut khoob adil bhai Applause

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«Reply #13 on: October 22, 2012, 03:30:53 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob Adil bhai, bahut khoob kafi achhi lagi ye ghazal.
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«Reply #14 on: October 24, 2012, 10:51:17 AM »
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Bechain Sahaab Aadaab!


Bahut umdaa janab behad khoob khayaaloN ko umdaa ashaaroN meiN
baNdha hai... Usual Smile

Kafi achche ashaar rahe... Puri kalaam par humari dheroN dili
daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye.... Usual Smile

Aapki kalaam se hume humara aik sher hume yaad aa gaya...



Humne chahhaa ke mohobbat meiN khudaa dekheN
Log hai ke daulat pe imaaN banaaye baite haiN



Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda hafez... Usual Smile


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