Zindagi hai chalne ka naam

by Pooja on October 28, 2008, 05:32:00 PM
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Diwali ke is pawan utsav per tera sath nahi
rah gai bas wo yaadein meri,
hum tum ka koi sath nahi
raho jahan bhi, raho khush,
deep jeevan main jugmagate rahe
Jab bhi kabhi ayye dukho ka saya,
meri dua Bhagwaan ji ka sath rahe!!

kabhi jalaye deep tumhare sung,
ajj tumhare waris wo deep jagate hai
Unki muskaan main mil jaati hai shanti,
beete waqat bhala kab lout kar atte hai!!

Badna hai ab tumne, badna hai ab maine
chalo yahi se yah samjh jaate hai
Zindagi hai chalne ka naam
Shubh deepawali ke deep jagmagate hai

jagmagaye jeevan tera,
dil se yahi dua kiye jaate hai
zindagi hai chalne ka naam
jina hai so jiye jaate hai!!

Happy Diwali!!
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«Reply #1 on: October 29, 2008, 05:57:38 AM »
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nice creation pooja ji

deep tujh bin jala rahi hoon mein
tujh bin dekh muskura rahi hoon mein
sab dekhtein hain mere honton ki muskurahat
par na jaane kitne ashq sukhe baha rahi hoon mein

tu khush rahe saath jeevansaathi k apne
apni tanhaiyon ko ab tak gale laga rahi hoon mein
paas tha tab bhi thi kuch duriyaan
ab duriyon ko hi yaadon mei basaa rahi hoon mein

jab tak dekh na leti tera chehra har tyohar adhura tha mera
aaj tere bin har tyohaar mana rahi hoon mein
ek tere bin mere jeevan mei hai andhiyara
fir bhi roshni se ghar jagmagaa rahi hoon mein
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«Reply #2 on: October 29, 2008, 03:46:26 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
Bhawna ek baat kahe bina nahi rah sakti jo main likhna chahti thi wo app poori tarah se likh gai hai..

ek ek shabd, ek ek line kamal ki likhi hai apne....  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

A very good creation. Yah thread jin bhawnao se open kiya tha... app ka likha ek ek shabd usko poora kar raha hai!!

Khush raho!!
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«Reply #3 on: October 30, 2008, 05:03:26 AM »
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ji shukriya pooja ji notworthy

par aapki likhi lines ko padhkar mera dard bhi kuch ubhar aaya tha diwali par soch rahi thi aakhir kis tarike se apni bhaawnao ko prakat karu par aapki jab ye post padhi to sach pooja ji ye poetry apne aap hi banti chali gayi
shyd meri feelings ko aapke shabdo ka hi intzaar tha Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: October 30, 2008, 05:36:10 PM »
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kabhi jalaye deep tumhare sung,
ajj tumhare waris wo deep jagate hai
Unki muskaan main mil jaati hai shanti,
beete waqat bhala kab lout kar atte hai!!

jagmagaye jeevan tera,
dil se yahi dua kiye jaate hai
zindagi hai chalne ka naam
jina hai so jiye jaate hai!!


Pooja,har ek line, har ek shabd, dil se likha hai aapne..

par khaas kar yeh lines dil ko chu gaye.. Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bhawna ji, bahu bahut khoob.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: October 30, 2008, 06:27:27 PM »
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Zindagi Ke Iss Safar Mein,
Ab Har Kadam Hamara Hai,
Raah Par Biche Phool Bhi Apne The,
aur Ab Pairon Par,
Chubta hua Kaanta bhi Hamara hai...


Jo Daur Guzar Gaya,
Uss Pal ko Yaad Kar,
Kyon ashk Bahaye hum???
khud ko luta kar Humne,
iss Gulshan ko sawaara hai....


Jo Shaks Jee Raha Ho,
kisi aur ke Chehre par muskaan ko dekh kar,
Uske aankhon mein aansu dekhna
 yahan kisse gawara hai???



Yehi Hai Apni Zindagi Ka Falsafa "KHWAISH"
yahan aansu bhi apne hai aur
Daaman bhi Hamara Hai.....
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«Reply #6 on: October 30, 2008, 08:00:28 PM »
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pooja ji, bhawna, khwahish sabhi ne bahoot achcha likha hai... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: October 30, 2008, 08:07:08 PM »
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thanks bhawna.

bahoot khoob khwaish ji!! bahoot acha likha hai apne...

shukaria Bekarar ji
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«Reply #8 on: October 31, 2008, 04:46:47 AM »
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you r  Welcome Banner  pooja ji    Hats off to you!
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«Reply #9 on: October 31, 2008, 04:48:30 AM »
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pooja ji, bhawna, khwahish sabhi ne bahoot achcha likha hai... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

ji shukriya sanjeev brother  notworthy
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«Reply #10 on: October 31, 2008, 04:49:35 AM »
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Zindagi Ke Iss Safar Mein,
Ab Har Kadam Hamara Hai,
Raah Par Biche Phool Bhi Apne The,
aur Ab Pairon Par,
Chubta hua Kaanta bhi Hamara hai...


Jo Daur Guzar Gaya,
Uss Pal ko Yaad Kar,
Kyon ashk Bahaye hum???
khud ko luta kar Humne,
iss Gulshan ko sawaara hai....


Jo Shaks Jee Raha Ho,
kisi aur ke Chehre par muskaan ko dekh kar,
Uske aankhon mein aansu dekhna
 yahan kisse gawara hai???



Yehi Hai Apni Zindagi Ka Falsafa "KHWAISH"
yahan aansu bhi apne hai aur
Daaman bhi Hamara Hai.....


shukriya khwaish ji  notworthy   notworthy
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«Reply #11 on: October 31, 2008, 12:16:40 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Pooja, Bhawna, Khwaish Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: October 31, 2008, 03:55:43 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Pooja, Bhawna, Khwaish Applause Applause Applause

Thank you Celmira Hats off to you!
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«Reply #13 on: November 01, 2008, 04:45:44 AM »
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thnk u celmira ji notworthy
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«Reply #14 on: November 08, 2008, 01:52:07 PM »
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nice good luck
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