zindagi

by adesh_goyal on April 24, 2005, 01:31:58 AM
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chal diya akela ek kashti mein,
karne sagar ko paar,
aankhon mein thi manzil,
dil mein tha vishwas apar,
chhoti si kashti thi lamba tha safar,
raaste mein aane the toofan,
badi kathin thi dagar,
takrata gaya saare toofanon se,
badhta gaya aage,
kitne bhanwar aaye raahon mein,
par dil mein ek junoon tha manzil ka,
saari mushkilon se ladkar pahunchne wala the sahil par,
achanak dagamagane lagi kashti,
bahut sambhala par nahin sambhli,
poochha bhagwan se he prabhu ye kya,
bole ki tu kis kashti par karne chala tha sagar ko par,
tere dil mein to himmat bahut thi par main kya karoon,
teri to apni hi kashti mein chhed tha........
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«Reply #1 on: April 24, 2005, 01:37:44 AM »
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teri to apni hi kashti mein chhed tha........
KYUN DUNIYA S CHUPYA YEH BHED THA.............
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«Reply #2 on: April 24, 2005, 03:43:47 AM »
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jawab ke liye bahut bahut shukriya naveed ji, lekin shayad aapko is kavita ki gehrai nahin maloom, ye insaan ki zindagi ke us pal ko bayan karti hai jab wo duniya se to jeet jata hai par khud se haar jata hai jo uske liye sabse zyada mayane rakhta hai...
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«Reply #3 on: April 24, 2005, 07:04:54 PM »
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Adesh Ji

Sher bohat achaa lagaa janaab... Zindage mein kissi tajribah say guzare howe lagthii ho...

Apnaa_koi
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«Reply #4 on: April 25, 2005, 03:55:21 PM »
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chal diya akela ek kashti mein,
karne sagar ko paar,
aankhon mein thi manzil,
dil mein tha vishwas apar,
chhoti si kashti thi lamba tha safar,
raaste mein aane the toofan,
badi kathin thi dagar,
takrata gaya saare toofanon se,
badhta gaya aage,
kitne bhanwar aaye raahon mein,
par dil mein ek junoon tha manzil ka,
saari mushkilon se ladkar pahunchne wala the sahil par,
achanak dagamagane lagi kashti,
bahut sambhala par nahin sambhli,
poochha bhagwan se he prabhu ye kya,
bole ki tu kis kashti par karne chala tha sagar ko par,
tere dil mein to himmat bahut thi par main kya karoon,
teri to apni hi kashti mein chhed tha........


hmmm really nice goyal ji!!!!

 :D
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nikki
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«Reply #5 on: April 25, 2005, 08:17:04 PM »
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bahut khoob Goyal ji............................................... ........
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adesh_goyal
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«Reply #6 on: April 30, 2005, 01:58:16 PM »
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Shukriya koi apne ji, meena ji aur nikki ji...apnaa_koi ji aapne sahi kaha, zindagi mein har roz ek naya tajurba milta hai, zaroorat hoti hai to usase seekh lene ki aur use shabdon mein pirone ki...
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«Reply #7 on: May 02, 2005, 05:35:32 PM »
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very nice adesh ji,well described bout life................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: May 03, 2005, 02:15:43 AM »
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Thanks a lot Nidhi ji,

Zindagi mein kuch aise bhi mod aate hain,
Jab sab apne paraye ho jate hain,

Kho jati hain saari khushiyan,
Gham ke saye hi bas kareeb reh jate hain...

Kahan to socha tha kisi ka pyar payenge,
kahan khudi se hi haar jate hain..

Kahan to paar kar liya tha ek kashti mein hi sagar saara,
kahan sahil par aakar hi doob jate hain...

Zindagi mein kuch aise bhi mod aate hain,
jab aankhon mein hoti hai nami, aur chehre par muskurahat ke diye jalaye jate hain..

Zindagi mein kuch aise mod bhi aate hain,
jab kho jaati hain saari raahein, bina manzil ke hi kadam badhaye jate hain...

Zindagi mein kuch aise mod bhi aate hain....
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«Reply #9 on: May 03, 2005, 02:23:23 AM »
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Jab sab apne paraye ho jate hain,





buhat khoob nice one.............................................. ................................................. .............................
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«Reply #10 on: May 03, 2005, 04:51:26 AM »
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Thanks a lot Nidhi ji,

Zindagi mein kuch aise bhi mod aate hain,
Jab sab apne paraye ho jate hain,

Kho jati hain saari khushiyan,
Gham ke saye hi bas kareeb reh jate hain...

Kahan to socha tha kisi ka pyar payenge,
kahan khudi se hi haar jate hain..

Kahan to paar kar liya tha ek kashti mein hi sagar saara,
kahan sahil par aakar hi doob jate hain...

Zindagi mein kuch aise bhi mod aate hain,
jab aankhon mein hoti hai nami, aur chehre par muskurahat ke diye jalaye jate hain..

Zindagi mein kuch aise mod bhi aate hain,
jab kho jaati hain saari raahein, bina manzil ke hi kadam badhaye jate hain...

Zindagi mein kuch aise mod bhi aate hain....


thats the beauty,again very very nice .
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«Reply #11 on: May 03, 2005, 09:27:18 AM »
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Thanks Nidhiji,
  Zindagi to ek ajeeb paheli hai....
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  neeche dekhte rehne se solve nahin hogi...
  just kidding..
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«Reply #12 on: May 06, 2005, 05:48:34 PM »
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Thanks a lot Nidhi ji,

Zindagi mein kuch aise bhi mod aate hain,
Jab sab apne paraye ho jate hain,

Kho jati hain saari khushiyan,
Gham ke saye hi bas kareeb reh jate hain...

Kahan to socha tha kisi ka pyar payenge,
kahan khudi se hi haar jate hain..

Kahan to paar kar liya tha ek kashti mein hi sagar saara,
kahan sahil par aakar hi doob jate hain...

Zindagi mein kuch aise bhi mod aate hain,
jab aankhon mein hoti hai nami, aur chehre par muskurahat ke diye jalaye jate hain..

Zindagi mein kuch aise mod bhi aate hain,
jab kho jaati hain saari raahein, bina manzil ke hi kadam badhaye jate hain...

Zindagi mein kuch aise mod bhi aate hain....



WOW.....SO TOUCHY AND CLOSE TO REALITY OF LIFE....really nice
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«Reply #13 on: May 08, 2005, 04:03:30 AM »
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Thanks a lot Nidhi ji,

Zindagi mein kuch aise bhi mod aate hain,
Jab sab apne paraye ho jate hain,

Kho jati hain saari khushiyan,
Gham ke saye hi bas kareeb reh jate hain...

Kahan to socha tha kisi ka pyar payenge,
kahan khudi se hi haar jate hain..

Kahan to paar kar liya tha ek kashti mein hi sagar saara,
kahan sahil par aakar hi doob jate hain...

Zindagi mein kuch aise bhi mod aate hain,
jab aankhon mein hoti hai nami, aur chehre par muskurahat ke diye jalaye jate hain..

Zindagi mein kuch aise mod bhi aate hain,
jab kho jaati hain saari raahein, bina manzil ke hi kadam badhaye jate hain...

Zindagi mein kuch aise mod bhi aate hain....



WOW.....SO TOUCHY AND CLOSE TO REALITY OF LIFE....really nice
shweta dear u should write it oo......................
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«Reply #14 on: May 08, 2005, 11:57:27 AM »
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Jab sab apne paraye ho jate hain,





buhat khoob nice one.............................................. ................................................. .............................
nice goyal great job!!!
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