Zindgi ka kinara...

by brokenbyluv on September 12, 2010, 09:16:04 PM
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Dosto ye kavita ek hi hai bus isme merri zindgi k do pehelu dikhane ki koshish ki hai maine...umeed karti hu aap sabko merri ye chhoti si koshish pasand ayegi...



Ek nagar tha merra bhi mhbt mein,
kisi k sang merra bhi guzara tha,

bepanah chaht thi hamare beech,
kayi baar usne merra naam mhbt se pukara tha,

samjhaya tha maine use ki vo hi merri zindgi hai,
chala gya mujhe chhodke ye jante hue ki vo hi merra sahara tha,

chali gyi har aas merri uski rukhsati k sath,
jeet hui thi nafrat bhari nigaho ki aur merra pyar haara tha,

ji liye zindgi ko bina uske bhi,
jo is jahan mein apno k baad mujhe sabse pyara tha,




khuda ne di jine ki ek nayi wajah merre ajnabi mein,
merri saari duaye kabul hui vo khuda ka ishara hai,

aaj bhi darta hai dil phir mhbt ko khone se,
jab k khuda k rehm-o-karam mein rishta hamara hai,

ab nayi zindgi mein jo mila hai vo mujhe,
tou judai ka ek bhi pal mujhe na gawara hai,

main jhumti hu uske milan ki aas mein har pal,
merri ankho mein sirrf uske hi deed ka nazara hai,

ab na koi mushkil dena merri mhbt ko ae khuda,
badi taklifo k baad maine khud ko uski mhbt mein phir ubhara hai,

ab usi se shuru hai merra har khayal bhi,
aur wahi ab merri zindgi ka kinara hai.........
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«Reply #1 on: September 12, 2010, 09:27:51 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya shihab ji...maine kuch tabdiliya ki hai zara unper ek nazar daal dijiyega..shukriya ek baar phir...
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«Reply #2 on: September 12, 2010, 09:29:02 PM »
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BBL jee Aadaab!

Aapke is tehreer ke ahsaas O khayaal behad umdaa rahe...
Daad kabool kijiye.......

Aapki is kalaam par Aik sawaal karna chaheNge agar aapki ijazat huyi to...Usual Smile

Likhati rahiye.....
Khush rahiye......
Khuda Hafez........ Usual Smile
        
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«Reply #3 on: September 12, 2010, 09:30:11 PM »
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shukriya parwaaz ji aur puchiye aap kya puchna chahte hai....
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«Reply #4 on: September 12, 2010, 09:34:05 PM »
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shurkiya shihab ji...
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«Reply #5 on: September 12, 2010, 10:01:41 PM »
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Jee aadaab!

Ab kia pucheN janab.... aapne humare sawaaliyaaN nishaaN ko hi gayab kar diya hai...... Giggle

Now it's perfect creation..... Keep Up..... Applause Applause Applause
Keep posting
keep smiling           
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: September 13, 2010, 03:29:42 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: September 13, 2010, 05:09:59 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI         BROKENBYLUV JI.......

KARKE MUJHSE KINARA CHOD DIYA USNE MUJHKO BE-SAHARA
BANKAR MERA SAHARA TUM BANJAO MERE "ZINDAGI KA KINARA".....
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«Reply #8 on: September 13, 2010, 09:23:31 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya shabbir ji,cara ji n parwaaz ji,parwaaz ji apka kya sawal tha jise maine suljha diya....
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«Reply #9 on: September 13, 2010, 11:02:19 AM »
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BBL ji bahut khoobsurat ,lajawaab.behad achhi koshish.
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«Reply #10 on: September 13, 2010, 11:30:35 AM »
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The ideas flow like a stream. Great going broken by luv...
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«Reply #11 on: September 13, 2010, 11:41:28 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya suresh jii  n asif ji.
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«Reply #12 on: September 13, 2010, 12:22:56 PM »
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Geet di,

Mujhe apki yeh kavita badi khubsoorat aur dil choone wali lagi..Kitni safayi se apne sab kuch jo bata sakti thi woh bata gayi..Bahaut khubsoorat..Dua hai, yeh ajnabi hamesha saath rahe apke..Ameen.!

Yeh do lines bahaut zada achi lagi mujhe:
"Ji liye zindagi ko uske bina,
Jo is jahan main mujhe apno k baad sabse pyaara tha"

Sach bolun toh I cn relate to this poem..I can feel it..

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«Reply #13 on: September 13, 2010, 01:16:52 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on September 13, 2010, 12:22:56 PM
Geet di,

Mujhe apki yeh kavita badi khubsoorat aur dil choone wali lagi..Kitni safayi se apne sab kuch jo bata sakti thi woh bata gayi..Bahaut khubsoorat..Dua hai, yeh ajnabi hamesha saath rahe apke..Ameen.!

Yeh do lines bahaut zada achi lagi mujhe:
"Ji liye zindagi ko uske bina,
Jo is jahan main mujhe apno k baad sabse pyaara tha"

Sach bolun toh I cn relate to this poem..I can feel it..

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut bahut shukriya rahiim ji,mhbt ka dard ek sa jo hota hai aksar dard bhare alfazo ko padhakr dil bhar hi ata hai....waise sach hi hai maine bhi apki kayi rachnao mein apna dard mehsus kiya hai,tou jayaz hai ji ki aap bhi apne dard ki jhalak merri rachano mein dekh sakte hai..dard aur gum ki bhale surat alag alag ho haan per uska asar hamesha sab per ek sa hi hota hai.......
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«Reply #14 on: September 13, 2010, 01:57:56 PM »
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Wah Geet-di ek naya nayaab andaaz...2 in 1.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


Quote from: brokenbyluv on September 12, 2010, 09:16:04 PM
Dosto ye kavita ek hi hai bus isme merri zindgi k do pehelu dikhane ki koshish ki hai maine...umeed karti hu aap sabko merri ye chhoti si koshish pasand ayegi...



Ek nagar tha merra bhi mhbt mein,
kisi k sang merra bhi guzara tha,

bepanah chaht thi hamare beech,
kayi baar usne merra naam mhbt se pukara tha,

samjhaya tha maine use ki vo hi merri zindgi hai,
chala gya mujhe chhodke ye jante hue ki vo hi merra sahara tha,

chali gyi har aas merri uski rukhsati k sath,
jeet hui thi nafrat bhari nigaho ki aur merra pyar haara tha,

ji liye zindgi ko bina uske bhi,
jo is jahan mein apno k baad mujhe sabse pyara tha,




khuda ne di jine ki ek nayi wajah merre ajnabi mein,
merri saari duaye kabul hui vo khuda ka ishara hai,

aaj bhi darta hai dil phir mhbt ko khone se,
jab k khuda k rehm-o-karam mein rishta hamara hai,

ab nayi zindgi mein jo mila hai vo mujhe,
tou judai ka ek bhi pal mujhe na gawara hai,

main jhumti hu uske milan ki aas mein har pal,
merri ankho mein sirrf uske hi deed ka nazara hai,

ab na koi mushkil dena merri mhbt ko ae khuda,
badi taklifo k baad maine khud ko uski mhbt mein phir ubhara hai,

ab usi se shuru hai merra har khayal bhi,
aur wahi ab merri zindgi ka kinara hai.........
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