इस दरख़्त पे परिंदे को पनाह भी नहीं

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इस चौराहे पर मेरे लिये एक राह भी नहीं !
इस दरख़्त पे परिंदे को पनाह भी नहीं !!

ये कैसे रंग दिखाए हैं तूने ऐ ज़िंदगी,
न ही सफ़ेदपोश हूँ मैं, और स्याह भी नहीं !!

ठोकरों से होती हे ज़ीनत ज़िन्दगी की, वरना,
चिल्लाते सन्नाटों में होगी एक आह भी नहीं !!

अब ख़ुद ही मरहम करना होगा मुसाफ़िर,
यहां कोई हक़ीम नहीं, कोई सलाह भी नहीं !!

फ़ुरक़त में कुछ यूं बेकार हुए हैं,
ना बंदगी हुई हमसे, और कोई गुनाह भी नहीं !!

उल्फत का कुछ ऐसा नशा हुआ हम पे,
कोई राह नहीं दिखती, और कोई चाह भी नहीं !!

वो मुस्कुराये तो हो गयी रौनक महफ़िल में ,
हमने  जान भी दे दी,  और एक वाह भी नहीं !!

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«Reply #1 on: May 27, 2014, 06:19:35 PM »
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waaah nakulji.... har zindgi ki sachchai nazar aayi aapke kalaam main... khub...

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«Reply #2 on: May 27, 2014, 07:39:29 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob Nakul jee...
Umdaa peshkash hai janab...
dheron dili daad qubool karein...
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«Reply #3 on: May 27, 2014, 07:54:25 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: May 27, 2014, 08:58:35 PM »
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bahut khooooooooob Nakulg behtareen peshkash...
Lajawaab pl.accept one RAU for it...after 2 hour

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«Reply #5 on: May 27, 2014, 09:15:36 PM »
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Thanks Saru Ji

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Lajawaab pl.accept one RAU for it...after 2 hour

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«Reply #6 on: May 27, 2014, 09:16:27 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: May 27, 2014, 09:17:01 PM »
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Shukriya  Bishwajeet  Ji

Bahut bahut khoob Nakul jee...
Umdaa peshkash hai janab...
dheron dili daad qubool karein...

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«Reply #8 on: May 27, 2014, 09:17:40 PM »
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waaah nakulji.... har zindgi ki sachchai nazar aayi aapke kalaam main... khub...

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«Reply #9 on: May 27, 2014, 11:17:37 PM »
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इस चौराहे पर मेरे लिये एक राह भी नहीं !
इस दरख़्त पे परिंदे को पनाह भी नहीं !!

ये कैसे रंग दिखाए हैं तूने ऐ ज़िंदगी,
न ही सफ़ेदपोश हूँ मैं, और स्याह भी नहीं !!

ठोकरों से होती हे ज़ीनत ज़िन्दगी की, वरना,
चिल्लाते सन्नाटों में होगी एक आह भी नहीं !!

अब ख़ुद ही मरहम करना होगा मुसाफ़िर,
यहां कोई हक़ीम नहीं, कोई सलाह भी नहीं !!

फ़ुरक़त में कुछ यूं बेकार हुए हैं,
ना बंदगी हुई हमसे, और कोई गुनाह भी नहीं !!

उल्फत का कुछ ऐसा नशा हुआ हम पे,
कोई राह नहीं दिखती, और कोई चाह भी नहीं !!

वो मुस्कुराये तो हो गयी रौनक महफ़िल में ,
हमने  जान भी दे दी,  और एक वाह भी नहीं !!




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«Reply #10 on: May 27, 2014, 11:41:09 PM »
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Shukriya Sir..

with rau outstanding,sir
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«Reply #11 on: May 28, 2014, 12:08:00 AM »
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 icon_flower icon_flower icon_flowerrau hazir hai nakulg
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«Reply #12 on: May 28, 2014, 12:08:51 AM »
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Shukriya Saru Ji!!



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«Reply #13 on: May 28, 2014, 12:14:19 AM »
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So nice.
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«Reply #14 on: May 28, 2014, 12:21:33 AM »
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Shukriya Saagar Ji
So nice.
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