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by Raqeeb on July 23, 2012, 05:08:23 PM
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अपने सपनो की तलाश में ।
भटक रहा हु हर रोज़ दर-बदर ।।

पा लूँगा एक दिन अपनी मंजिल ।
हर सुबह बना रहा हु रास्ता इस कदर ।।

थक गए हैं थूकने वाले ज़माने में ।
शर्मिंदगी में उठ नहीं पा रहा वो नज़र ।।

कभी आँका था उसने हमे सरेआम।
आज फँस गया है खुद वो बेखबर ।।

चला था जिस राह पे अकेले ही 'रक़ीब' ।
आज दिखता है कारवाँ इधर-उधर ।।
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«Reply #1 on: July 23, 2012, 05:10:39 PM »
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अपने सपनो की तलाश में ।
भटक रहा हु हर रोज़ दर-बदर ।।

पा लूँगा एक दिन अपनी मंजिल ।
हर सुबह बना रहा हु रास्ता इस कदर ।।

चला था उस राह पे अकेले ही 'रक़ीब' ।
आज दिखता है कारवाँ इधर-उधर ।।

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«Reply #2 on: July 23, 2012, 05:12:14 PM »
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Kaafi achha hai Raqib bhai, par aap isse aage badhaiye.
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«Reply #3 on: July 23, 2012, 05:13:06 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: July 23, 2012, 06:27:12 PM »
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Kaafi achha hai Raqib bhai, par aap isse aage badhaiye.

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«Reply #5 on: July 23, 2012, 06:27:57 PM »
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अपने सपनो की तलाश में ।
भटक रहा हु हर रोज़ दर-बदर ।।

पा लूँगा एक दिन अपनी मंजिल ।
हर सुबह बना रहा हु रास्ता इस कदर ।।

चला था उस राह पे अकेले ही 'रक़ीब' ।
आज दिखता है कारवाँ इधर-उधर ।।

थक गए हैं थूकने वाले ज़माने में ।
शर्मिंदगी में उठ नहीं पा रहा वो नज़र ।।

कभी आँका था उसने हमे सरेआम।
आज फँस गया है खुद वो बेखबर ।।


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