हां ,मैं एक कवि हू.........

by pawan16 on May 24, 2012, 06:10:36 AM
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हां ,मैं एक  कवि हू,
दुनिया के हर दिल की एक  छवि हू,
हर जगह उजाला कर रहा हू,
समझ मै  उगता रवि हू,
मैं सब जगह भुजाओ  को फेलाये हुये,
हर जगह से फेल ती परथवी हू,
हर जगह हरियाली लाता,
एक  ऐसे रुप की जाह्नवी हू,
हर जज्बात को छूता,
हर  दिल  का   अवि  हू,
पेड की शाखो से निकलता,
अर्थ   मे  एक  पल्लवी हू,
मैं खुद मानता हू ,
सब एहसासो से परे ,
एक  नये रुप के कवि की छवि हू .....पवन
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«Reply #1 on: May 24, 2012, 06:22:07 AM »
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बड़ी अच्छी कविता लगी आपकी पवन जी  आपको साधुवाद और जैसा कि आप जानते ही हैं "जहां न पहुचें रवि वहां पहुचे कवि " तो एक RAU  तो आपका हुआ पर शब्द जज़्बात अपने आप में ही बहुवचन है तो जज्बातों ठीक नहीं और भी वर्तनी संबंधी कई त्रुटियाँ है कृपया ख्याल रक्खे क्यों कि टाइप राइटर तो वही टाइप करेगा जो आप कहेंगे 
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«Reply #2 on: May 24, 2012, 06:31:58 AM »
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saini ji apka tanhe dil se sukriya......bas yu hi saath dete rahiye...
hum koshish apni puri kar rahe hai ki hum apni galatiyo ko sudhaar le...jo galtiya hai unhe hum thik kar lenge....dhanywaad
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«Reply #3 on: May 24, 2012, 11:50:51 AM »
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bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Sundar Rachna.
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«Reply #5 on: May 25, 2012, 06:44:26 AM »
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bahut khoob....

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«Reply #6 on: May 26, 2012, 04:41:26 PM »
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