AASMAAN...

by @kaash on February 25, 2009, 10:16:55 AM
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aasmaan..


kisne banaya hai
kisne banaya hai ye aasmaan
kitna sundar sa sabki preet ka keertimaan
samajh me nahi aata mezbaan hai ya mehmaan

aasmaan...


aasmaan...





aasmaan..



kya kahta hai ye
haan ye yehi kahta hai shayad
na sandeh karo na shaq karo bhale ise na dekho
par jab bhi dekho apna kaho apnepan se dekho
kya nahi hai isme sabkuch hai vohi Khuda hai isme
aisa lagta hai sabke lie hi dua karta rahta hai ye tamaam

aasmaan...





neeli neeli vaadiyaan hain isme
indrdhanush ka saptrang bhi hai isme
kabhi ghataon se kabhi laal rang se bhara hua
jahan koi nahi vahan bhi rangon ka ye saamaan



aasmaan...


ye tab bhi tha jab koi na tha
ye tab bhi hoga jab koi na hoga
zara sa dekhne se deta hai kaynaat ka sukoon
hamesha ujala hai isme,aur ye hai bus Khudaayi ka kadrdaan

aasmaan...



aasmaan..


aasmaan...



-KAASH-


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honeyrose
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«Reply #1 on: February 26, 2009, 01:22:58 PM »
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Bohat sunder likha hai kaash ji... Applause
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Talat
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«Reply #2 on: February 26, 2009, 01:41:24 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Khoobsurat images ke saath, khoobsurat sher....bohot khoob Kaash Ji
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #3 on: February 26, 2009, 02:46:41 PM »
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@kaash ji!
Aapki pyaaree nazar (aur aapkee pasand hai laajawwab) ko koyi bhi choomney ki gustaakhee kar saktaa hai, janaab! Sambhal kar rahiyegaa!!
          - abd bundeli
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #4 on: February 27, 2009, 05:21:34 AM »
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shukriya Abd ji...thanks 4 liking my composition...
You're welcome @kaash ji!
                - abd bundeli
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #5 on: March 02, 2009, 04:41:50 AM »
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bohut acha lagaa aapka likha hua padhkar
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«Reply #6 on: May 05, 2009, 06:59:04 PM »
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wah wah yah to ajj najar parri.. Kaash ji asmaan ki pics ke sath shayri ko char chand lag gaye hai... wah bahoot khoob!!
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #7 on: May 05, 2009, 08:37:07 PM »
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Bahut hi sundar peshkash hai Kaash Ji
SO nice, creative and descriptive work
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #8 on: May 05, 2009, 10:12:55 PM »
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excellent work kaash ji,and very beautiful scene.really nice one.
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«Reply #9 on: June 03, 2009, 06:21:19 PM »
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wah wah Kya Baat Hai Kaash Bhai.. Behad Khubsoorat Pics ke sath Behad Khubsoorat rachna pesh ki hai aapne.. Lajawab Peshkash hai dost.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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