Badli ban kar urti jaon gi

by sushilbansal on September 13, 2012, 12:02:35 AM
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PEeAar ki badli bankar urti jaon gi
zhumu gi nachu gi gaoo gi
nae subha kay naye khavabo sang
kathin dagar par bhi barti jauo gi.
 
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«Reply #1 on: September 13, 2012, 09:34:01 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: September 13, 2012, 01:09:49 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: September 13, 2012, 02:13:08 PM »
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pahla shabda Pyaar hai..agar mai theek samjha hun to?
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«Reply #4 on: September 13, 2012, 02:15:23 PM »
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PEeAar ki badli bankar urti jaon gi
jhoomu gi nachu gi gaoo gi
nae subha kay naye khavabo sang
kathin dagar par bhi barti jauo gi.
 


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«Reply #5 on: September 13, 2012, 04:59:30 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: September 14, 2012, 05:46:19 AM »
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Bahut khoob

pahla shabda Pyaar hai..agar mai theek samjha hun to?
Ji aap nay sahi kaha,jitna aap ka shukria karu kam rahega yeha say shuru hoti hai eak nai shuruat.
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«Reply #7 on: September 14, 2012, 07:42:12 AM »
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acha hai sushil bhai
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«Reply #8 on: September 14, 2012, 09:30:10 PM »
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 happy1 :thanks:for your comments over my writting.
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