barish ka mosam

by chitralsony on August 12, 2009, 04:28:18 AM

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«Reply #15 on: August 14, 2009, 10:22:02 PM »

Quote from: thegrimreaper on August 13, 2009, 10:33:56 PM

bahut accha likha hai chitralsony ji

thank u so much


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Re: barish ka mosam

«Reply #16 on: August 14, 2009, 10:23:01 PM »

Quote from: Roja on August 12, 2009, 02:43:29 PM

Bahut accha likha hai chitra dear last five lines bahut hi accha laga padkar.
Nice work

thank u roja je


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Re: barish ka mosam

«Reply #17 on: August 14, 2009, 10:24:00 PM »

Quote from: -Saahil- on August 14, 2009, 07:31:34 AM

bahut achche taiba sis and cara dear a wonderful reply

yeh baarish ka mausam kabhi kabhi aa kar
meri aankhon k raaste baras jaata hai
de jaata hai woh guzre pal yaar k saath k
jinhe yaad kar k yeh dil machal jaata hai

thank u dear brother


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Re: barish ka mosam

«Reply #18 on: August 14, 2009, 10:25:10 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on August 14, 2009, 04:24:12 PM

wah wah wah kaya baat hai Chitra bahot khoob....
Cara ji, Lil bro sahil bahoot khoob!!

Barsaat se pahle ki hawa, skoon dil ko de jaaye
barsaat ki sondhi sondhi se mehak, man pawan kar jaaye
bheege bheege fiza, ek nai dunia se najar ayye
dekh prakriti ka yah roop,man mera chiria ban urrta jaaye

bhot shokriya poja sis


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Re: barish ka mosam

«Reply #19 on: August 15, 2009, 05:29:40 AM »

Quote from: poppoetry on August 14, 2009, 07:52:27 AM

Bahut hi pyaara likha hai chitra ji Applause

Bahut accha jwaab Cara ji Applause

Bahut khub saath diya aapne saahil ji Applause

nawazish pop je


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Re: barish ka mosam

«Reply #20 on: August 24, 2009, 05:09:33 PM »

Quote from: chitralsony on August 12, 2009, 04:28:18 AM

yay barish ka mosam satata bhot hai
yay sawan hamay yun azmata bhot hai
yay nadi ka pani yay jharnay ka naghma
na janay kyun dil ko bhata bhot hai
yay nam hokay barish kai pani mai mati
mairay rooh tak ko mehkata bhot hai
yay sham e odasi yay beega sa mosam
mujko tanhayi ka ehsas dilata bhot hai
tasaver hina oska aysay mai akay
is baichain dil ko rulata bhot hai

bahoot khoob chitral ji.....