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by vimmi singh on October 03, 2012, 03:55:03 PM
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दर्द  मिलता  रहा ज्यादा
गम बहता रहा ज्यादा
ख़ुशी कि तो नाम-ओ-निशाँ नहीं  
बस दिल तड़पता रहा ज्यादा

कुछ पास नहीं कुछ दूर नहीं
वक़्त  गुज़रता रहा ज्यादा
इन खामोशियों के अंधेरों में
धुप छाता रहा ज्यादा

इन हाथों कि रेखाओं ने
हर पल जला डाला
कुछ सच्चा कुछ झूठा ये फ़साना
सूखे पत्ते कि तरह उड़ता जाता रहा
दिल बेचारा
ज़िन्दगी सरोशाम
ख़ाक बनकर रह गयी
कुछ यूँ महफिल  में
जलता रहा ज्यादा ....
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«Reply #1 on: October 03, 2012, 04:02:50 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: October 03, 2012, 04:08:31 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya saini sir ji.......
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«Reply #3 on: October 03, 2012, 04:23:32 PM »
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nice...
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«Reply #4 on: October 03, 2012, 04:24:58 PM »
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shukriya ritesh ji.......
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«Reply #5 on: October 03, 2012, 06:27:37 PM »
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bahut achhe vimmi ji,
ghansham das ahuja
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«Reply #6 on: October 03, 2012, 07:09:02 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Ghansham das ahuja ji......... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: October 03, 2012, 07:18:52 PM »
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Bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne.
ehsaas o khayaalaat ki behatreen numaaish

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«Reply #8 on: October 03, 2012, 07:42:29 PM »
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gud one........
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«Reply #9 on: October 03, 2012, 11:48:47 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya mkv ji aapke daad ke liye....... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: October 03, 2012, 11:51:35 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya aqsh ji........ Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: October 06, 2012, 01:37:08 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut Khoob Vimmi ji,.,...!!!
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«Reply #12 on: October 06, 2012, 10:01:39 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Hriday ji......... Usual Smile
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