jalti rahi

by vimmi singh on November 16, 2012, 05:50:28 PM
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sukhe patton ki shaakh jalti rahi
hum nahi badle taarikh badalti rahi
khoyi hun jaane kaun si dunia hai
sab yahi rahe tasweer badalti rahi
sukhe patton ki shaakh jalti rahi
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«Reply #1 on: November 16, 2012, 08:45:20 PM »
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Vimmy Jee Aadaab!


WaaH jee waaH kia baat hai bahut khoob jee bahut khoob...
bade hi achche khayaal khoob ashaaroN meiN dhale hai aapne.. Usual Smile


Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   
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«Reply #2 on: November 17, 2012, 01:24:52 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #3 on: November 17, 2012, 01:59:09 AM »
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bahut khoob vimmi ji
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«Reply #4 on: November 17, 2012, 04:24:54 AM »
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Quote from: vimmi singh on November 16, 2012, 05:50:28 PM
sukhe patton ki shaakh jalti rahi
hum nahi badle taarikh badalti rahi
khoyi hun jaane kaun si dunia hai
sab yahi rahe tasweer badalti rahi
sukhe patton ki shaakh jalti rahi
nice
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«Reply #5 on: November 17, 2012, 04:41:38 AM »
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Quote from: vimmi singh on November 16, 2012, 05:50:28 PM
sukhe patton ki shaakh jalti rahi
hum nahi badle taarikh badalti rahi
khoyi hun jaane kaun si dunia hai
sab yahi rahe tasweer badalti rahi
sukhe patton ki shaakh jalti rahi
bohut khoob vimmi jee umda khayalat aur ehsasat piroye haiN aapne dheerroonn daaaad qubool karen
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«Reply #6 on: November 17, 2012, 04:55:28 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on November 16, 2012, 08:45:20 PM
Vimmy Jee Aadaab!


WaaH jee waaH kia baat hai bahut khoob jee bahut khoob...
bade hi achche khayaal khoob ashaaroN meiN dhale hai aapne.. Usual Smile


Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   


aapka bahut bahut shukriya parwaaz ji.....
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«Reply #7 on: November 17, 2012, 04:59:38 AM »
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waah vimi ji bohut khub ek rau apka hua
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«Reply #8 on: November 17, 2012, 07:37:00 AM »
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Nice creation.
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«Reply #9 on: November 17, 2012, 07:45:46 AM »
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Quote from: prashad on November 17, 2012, 01:24:52 AM
very nice

thank you prashad ji........  Usual Smile Usual Smile
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Quote from: nandbahu on November 17, 2012, 01:59:09 AM
bahut khoob vimmi ji

bahut bahut shukriya nandbahu ji...  Usual Smile Usual Smile
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Quote from: MANOJ6568 on November 17, 2012, 04:24:54 AM
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Quote from: Aarish on November 17, 2012, 04:41:38 AM
bohut khoob vimmi jee umda khayalat aur ehsasat piroye haiN aapne dheerroonn daaaad qubool karen

bahut bahut shukriya Aarish ji aapka........  Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: November 19, 2012, 06:32:24 AM »
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bahut umda
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«Reply #14 on: November 19, 2012, 08:22:20 AM »
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Quote from: saahill on November 17, 2012, 04:59:38 AM
waah vimi ji bohut khub ek rau apka hua

bahut bahut shukriya saahill ji aapka.... aise hi saath dete rahen........  Usual Smile Usual Smile
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