kab tak,(CSET)

by MANOJ6568 on November 06, 2012, 11:05:36 AM
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kab tak karoge mere* putle ka dahan
nafrat tumhari ab hoti nahi sahan

burai ka chola waqt ne mujko tha pahnaya
mei apne ek karm se aaj tak hu pachtaya
sarupnakha ka bhai kudrat nei mujhe banaya
khamkha mei uski jhooti baato mei tha aaya
apmaan sahan mei apni bahan ka na kar paaya
gusse mei par naari ko ghar mei utha laaya
us abla naari ko meine haath tak na lagaya
gungaan meri sharafat ka kisi ne na gaaya
apne ek krm se mein, aaj tak hu pachtaya

sita ko khojte -2 dal ram ka jab hain aaya
ram ne yudh se pahle man pooja ka banaya
mujh pt. ko lanka se ramesaram mei bulwaya
meine bhi apna brahman dharm khub tha nibhaya
vidhi vidhan se pooja ko sampan ka karwaya
kulhadi apni jeet per mein khud hi maar aaya
aate aate vijai bhav ka aashirwad de aaya
dharm se meine kabhi paav nahi hain hataya
apne sirf ek karm se mei hu aaj tak pachtaya


*mere shabd ya  raavan ka sambhodhan hain
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nice
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gud
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waah waah
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«Reply #5 on: November 06, 2012, 01:06:06 PM »
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bahut khub
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bahut khub
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«Reply #9 on: November 06, 2012, 04:54:11 PM »
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bahut bahut bahut hi khoob
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bahut bahut bahut hi khoob
baht bahut bahut thx
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