khud ko bachpan mein le jane ka man hai.. charan..

by lovely_charan on December 02, 2012, 08:05:39 AM
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aaj phir se phoolon ke bageeche mein jane ka man hai..
aaj fir se ujdhe huye dareeche ko sajane ka man hai..

kahin se phool kahin se titli kahin se hawayein le aao..
aaj phir se saawan ke geeton ko gaane ka man hai..

ek pedh ho peepal ka uske neeche hon ghaas hari..
aaj phir se us hari ghaas mein ghar patton ka banane ka man hai..

ek deewar ho phoolon ki aur usme kuch bhanwre aaye..
aaj phir se jugnu ke peeche jaal bichhane ka man hai..

ek sundar se kone mein kuch taazi sabji ugti hon..
aaj phir se un gudde gudiya ka vyaah rachane ka man hai..

yeh kaisi uljhan mein hun bolo main baat phoolon ki karti hun..
par sach bataun toh khud ko bachpan mein le jane ka man hai..
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«Reply #1 on: December 02, 2012, 08:25:33 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #2 on: December 02, 2012, 09:49:45 AM »
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bahut khoob charan jee
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«Reply #3 on: December 02, 2012, 11:58:08 AM »
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jeet very very nice....kya baat hai
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«Reply #4 on: December 02, 2012, 01:25:51 PM »
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bahut khoob CJ
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«Reply #5 on: December 02, 2012, 02:14:44 PM »
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waah waah
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«Reply #6 on: December 02, 2012, 07:02:36 PM »
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very nice
thank you ji
bahut khoob charan jee
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thanks a lot..

jeet very very nice....kya baat hai
thank you very very much bhaiya.. Usual Smile
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waah waah

thank you sir.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: December 02, 2012, 07:27:58 PM »
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hmmmmmm umda kosish hai charan ji, umeed karta hun aage aap aur bhi behtari ke saath apne khayalon ko pesh kareNgi, yuNHi likhti rahiye, khush rahiye...!!
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«Reply #8 on: December 02, 2012, 08:00:15 PM »
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hmmmmmm umda kosish hai charan ji, umeed karta hun aage aap aur bhi behtari ke saath apne khayalon ko pesh kareNgi, yuNHi likhti rahiye, khush rahiye...!!
thank you jee.. aap sabka sath rahega toh main aage bhi acha likhne ki koshish karungi..
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«Reply #9 on: December 03, 2012, 02:47:12 AM »
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Bahot achha likha hai lovely ji. Daad pesh hai.
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«Reply #10 on: December 03, 2012, 02:15:55 PM »
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«Reply #11 on: December 03, 2012, 02:49:12 PM »
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thank you very very much Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: December 27, 2012, 01:18:54 AM »
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nice post. congratulations
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«Reply #13 on: December 27, 2012, 05:52:12 AM »
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thank you sheel didi..
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