lout ke aai dar ko ~~~~~~~Raahi~~~~~~~~

by Rahi2001 on October 12, 2010, 09:01:47 AM
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bhul gayi thi jo apne ghar ko
aaj lout ke aai dar ko
kabhi maan ke gale lipat.ti
kabhi chume bhai ke sar ko

aaj din hua bada nirala
sabko khushiyan dene wala
kahin giry jo aansu aankhon se
wo bhi the khushi ke dar ko

kabhi na jaon akele ghar se
kahti hai wo larki darr se
bada bhayanak tha wo lamha
jab bhatki thi mai dar dar ko

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«Reply #1 on: October 12, 2010, 11:24:35 AM »
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good work rahi bhai keep writting
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«Reply #2 on: October 13, 2010, 04:13:18 AM »
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bht khubbb likha hai rahul tumne...dil chho gai ye dastaan....
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