,,,mera dard,,,

by vimmi singh on November 19, 2012, 05:18:57 PM
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Yahan main dard bayaan karun toh aap waah waah karoge
Dard toh mera hai aaah toh meri hi niklegi
Aap kahoge kya likha kya khub likha
Maine likha hai mujhe pta kaise aansuo se inko siincha
Kabhi khali unki bewafai toh kabhi apno ka gum
Har chaak pe khud hi ko bante dekha bigadte bhi
chhutpan se mere saath mere dard ki rahi shumaari bhi
mere saath pala badha ab jawaan hua
haath ki gili mitti se saanche me pak kar taiyaar hua
Log kahte hain dard suna do toh kam ho jaayega
Yahan main dard bayaan karun toh aap waah waah karoge
Dard toh mera hai aaah toh meri hi niklegi…
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«Reply #1 on: November 19, 2012, 05:38:27 PM »
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Ab wah wah na kare to kya kre...
Ye dard bi apka, ye aah bi aapki,
ye sabd bi apke , ye taarif bi aapki,
ab wah wah na kare to kya kre ....

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«Reply #2 on: November 19, 2012, 05:47:37 PM »
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Ab wah wah na kare to kya kre...
Ye dard bi apka, ye aah bi aapki,
ye sabd bi apke , ye taarif bi aapki,
ab wah wah na kare to kya kre ....


aapka shukriya Monu ji, is or nazar daalne ke liye
waah waah toh aapke kalaam pe karne ko ji chahta hai...
waah waah....khoob.....
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«Reply #3 on: November 19, 2012, 08:12:52 PM »
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Vimmy Jee Aadaab!


WaaH jee waaH kia kahne aapke is umdaa khayaal ke...
Bahut khoob jee bada achcha khayaal aur umdaa tehreer
ko anjaam diyaa hai aapne... Usual Smile

Bhai aap itna khoob likhoNge toH hum na chahte huye
bhi aah aur waaH toH kar hi jaayeNge... Usual Smile
Ab yeH nainsafi na kijiye hum par.. icon_scratch

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye.... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   

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«Reply #4 on: November 20, 2012, 12:40:19 AM »
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bahut khoob vimmi ji
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«Reply #5 on: November 20, 2012, 03:20:22 AM »
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wah kya bat hai kya bat hai
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«Reply #6 on: November 20, 2012, 03:59:36 AM »
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bahu  khoob likha hai.vimmiji.bahut badhai.
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«Reply #7 on: November 20, 2012, 04:11:46 AM »
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very nice vimmi ji
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«Reply #8 on: November 20, 2012, 04:51:56 AM »
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laajawaab peshkash vimmi ji dheron daad
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«Reply #9 on: November 20, 2012, 05:33:37 AM »
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Wah Wha Wha Bahut Khoob........Khyalat Behad Umda.......Behad Shandaar Creation Vimmi Ji...
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«Reply #10 on: November 20, 2012, 06:28:27 AM »
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Vimmy Jee Aadaab!


WaaH jee waaH kia kahne aapke is umdaa khayaal ke...
Bahut khoob jee bada achcha khayaal aur umdaa tehreer
ko anjaam diyaa hai aapne... Usual Smile

Bhai aap itna khoob likhoNge toH hum na chahte huye
bhi aah aur waaH toH kar hi jaayeNge... Usual Smile
Ab yeH nainsafi na kijiye hum par.. icon_scratch

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye.... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   



aapka tahe dil se bahut bahut shukriya parwaaz ji..... yun hi saath banaaye rakhe...
aapke saath ke liye Thank you very much......

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«Reply #11 on: November 20, 2012, 06:43:54 AM »
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bahut khoob vimmi ji
bahut bahut shukriya nandbahu ji aapka.......
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«Reply #12 on: November 20, 2012, 08:48:27 AM »
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«Reply #13 on: November 21, 2012, 05:25:00 AM »
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wah kya bat hai kya bat hai

bahut bahut shukriya Anmol ji.........
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«Reply #14 on: November 25, 2012, 11:08:55 AM »
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bahu  khoob likha hai.vimmiji.bahut badhai.
thank you SIDDIQUI ji.........
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