::Saawan ki kaali ghata::

by nidhi_yadein on August 15, 2005, 09:58:17 AM
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hi friends,
              Aaj mujhe yaad aaya saawan khatam hone ho hai aur maine kuch likha hi nahi saawan pe  tongue3  lol,so writing a bit on saawan Usual Smile .

"Kaali ghata saawan ki is saawan bhi chhai rahi,
   teri kami hamesha ki tarah is saawan bhi rahi,
 
   har saal agle sawan tere saath ki tamanna karti hun,
   kaisi ye tanhaaiyon ki rut har saal mujhpe chhai rahi,
 
   main akele kisi kone me tujhe yaad karti rahi,
   dil me hamesha umeedon ki shama jalaaye rahi,

   na aaye tum,aur shayad kabhi aaoge bhi nahi,
   nadaani meri,hadh se zyada tujhe chahne lagi,

   barish ki boondon me aansuon ko chupaaye,
   teri tasveer haathon me liye nihaarti rahi,

   nasamajh khud ko kahoon ya tumko kahoon,
   pyaar andha hai,khud ko behlaane lagi,

   ek nazar dekh,kaise tera intezaar kiya hai,
   ek baar samajh to,kitna tujhe pyar kiya hai,

   itna yakeen hai mujhe khudpe yaar mere,
   mujhe jaan-ne ke baad na pher sakoge muh mujhse,

   is saawan ki ek barish mere naam karke to dekh,
   mere bina na beet sakega phir tumhara saawan ek."
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«Reply #1 on: August 15, 2005, 11:16:09 AM »
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is saawan ki ek barish mere naam karke to dekh,
mere bina na beet sakega phir tumhara saawan ek


Wah wah.. Bohat khoob Nidhi.....
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«Reply #2 on: August 15, 2005, 01:41:24 PM »
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achha likha hai NIDHI............................................ ...
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nikki
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«Reply #3 on: August 15, 2005, 02:40:46 PM »
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very nice Nidhi .................aate hi cha gayi ho...sawan ki ghata ki tarah..lolzzzzz...............kaisi ho?
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«Reply #4 on: August 15, 2005, 04:14:12 PM »
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hi friends,
              Aaj mujhe yaad aaya saawan khatam hone ho hai aur maine kuch likha hi nahi saawan pe  tongue3  lol,so writing a bit on saawan Usual Smile .

"Kaali ghata saawan ki is saawan bhi chhai rahi,
   teri kami hamesha ki tarah is saawan bhi rahi,
 
   har saal agle sawan tere saath ki tamanna karti hun,
   kaisi ye tanhaaiyon ki rut har saal mujhpe chhai rahi,
 
   main akele kisi kone me tujhe yaad karti rahi,
   dil me hamesha umeedon ki shama jalaaye rahi,

   na aaye tum,aur shayad kabhi aaoge bhi nahi,
   nadaani meri,hadh se zyada tujhe chahne lagi,

   barish ki boondon me aansuon ko chupaaye,
   teri tasveer haathon me liye nihaarti rahi,

   nasamajh khud ko kahoon ya tumko kahoon,
   pyaar andha hai,khud ko behlaane lagi,

   ek nazar dekh,kaise tera intezaar kiya hai,
   ek baar samajh to,kitna tujhe pyar kiya hai,

   itna yakeen hai mujhe khudpe yaar mere,
   mujhe jaan-ne ke baad na pher sakoge muh mujhse,

   is saawan ki ek barish mere naam karke to dekh,
   mere bina na beet sakega phir tumhara saawan ek."


wow wow  Nidhi...............sawan  per  kya  baat likhi.................mujhe  bhi  ek sher  yaad aaya...........tongue3  maine  koi  sher  is se  pehle is  tarz  per  likha  tha........

ai  dost  tumhari har  baatein  saawan  ki tarah  lagti  hai
jab   bhi  barasti    ho to  khoob  barasti  ho
ek  lamhe  mein mere   mann ko  bhigo  deti  ho
tere  aankhon  ka  har ask samundar ki tarah lagti hai.........
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«Reply #5 on: August 15, 2005, 06:31:53 PM »
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thanx Aryaan...bond(nice 2 c u,kahan gaayab ho jaate ho?),thank u nikki sis Usual Smile ,achi hun ab,and thanx a lot waheed.......bohat hi touching,infact u have written a truth i must say,lovely.
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«Reply #6 on: August 15, 2005, 06:40:58 PM »
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Bahut vadiya nidhi ji.........................good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #7 on: August 15, 2005, 06:42:53 PM »
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Bahut vadiya nidhi ji.........................good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: August 15, 2005, 06:59:07 PM »
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thanx Aryaan...bond(nice 2 c you,kahan gaayab ho jaate ho?),thank you nikki sis Usual Smile ,achi hun ab,and thanx a lot waheed.......bohat hi touching,infact you have written a truth i must say,lovely.


hmmmmmmmmm  thanxxxxxxx  alot   Nidhi.............  tongue3
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«Reply #9 on: August 16, 2005, 04:50:56 PM »
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hi friends,
              Aaj mujhe yaad aaya saawan khatam hone ho hai aur maine kuch likha hi nahi saawan pe  tongue3  lol,so writing a bit on saawan Usual Smile .

"Kaali ghata saawan ki is saawan bhi chhai rahi,
   teri kami hamesha ki tarah is saawan bhi rahi,
 
   har saal agle sawan tere saath ki tamanna karti hun,
   kaisi ye tanhaaiyon ki rut har saal mujhpe chhai rahi,
 
   main akele kisi kone me tujhe yaad karti rahi,
   dil me hamesha umeedon ki shama jalaaye rahi,

   na aaye tum,aur shayad kabhi aaoge bhi nahi,
   nadaani meri,hadh se zyada tujhe chahne lagi,

   barish ki boondon me aansuon ko chupaaye,
   teri tasveer haathon me liye nihaarti rahi,

   nasamajh khud ko kahoon ya tumko kahoon,
   pyaar andha hai,khud ko behlaane lagi,

   ek nazar dekh,kaise tera intezaar kiya hai,
   ek baar samajh to,kitna tujhe pyar kiya hai,

   itna yakeen hai mujhe khudpe yaar mere,
   mujhe jaan-ne ke baad na pher sakoge muh mujhse,

   is saawan ki ek barish mere naam karke to dekh,
   mere bina na beet sakega phir tumhara saawan ek."



The whole poem is fantastic ...
But i loved this lines too much ...

"na aaye tum,aur shayad kabhi aaoge bhi nahi,
nadaani meri,hadh se zyada tujhe chahne lagi, "

Keep it up ...
Sorry for getting late ...
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«Reply #10 on: August 16, 2005, 04:56:13 PM »
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Ye raat itni tanha kyu hoti hai,
Kismat se apni sabko shikayat kyu hoti hai,
Ye kismat bhi ajeeb khel khelti hai,
Jise hum paa nahi sakte usi se mohabbat kyu hoti hai ...
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«Reply #11 on: August 16, 2005, 06:04:08 PM »
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thanx a lot isha ji and ofcourse u my friend JHL,and wonderful written JHL Usual Smile .

"Raat aur akelepan ka alag hi kuch rishta hai,
  pyaar banke dikhta jab ek farishtaa hai,
  yaadon ke baadal andhere me rang laate hain,
  saugaat me hamein ansoo wo de jaate hain."
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«Reply #12 on: August 16, 2005, 06:13:20 PM »
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wah bahut khoob........JHL N NIDHI............................................ ...........
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«Reply #13 on: August 16, 2005, 06:19:12 PM »
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wah  wonderfullllllll   JHl.............   Nidhi.................  tongue3   bahot  khoob.....

mohabbat ki    baat na  karo,  yeh  humesha  dil  dukhaata hai
iski  waadi  mein  ashkon  ke  siwa kisi  ne kuch nahi  paaya hai   :oops:
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«Reply #14 on: August 16, 2005, 06:29:52 PM »
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Thanx bond,aise hi roz online aate raha karo glasses2 and thanx waheed too.......bohat khoob likha waheed tumne.

"Na paaya kisi ne mohabbat me kuch ashkon ke siwa hai,
 phir bhi har insaan karta kyun mohabbat hai?,
 rota hai,tadapta hai,na jee paata hai phir bhi,
 mohabbat ki raah kabhi nahi kyun chodtaa hai."
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