waqth ke sath hai sadiyo thak thanhai ka safar..

by Satya.patel on December 20, 2008, 05:29:40 PM
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apni marzi se kaha apne safar ke hai hum
rukh hawao ka jidhar ka hai udhar ke hai hum
pehle har cheez thi apni magar ab lagta hai
apne hi ghar mein jese dusre ghar ke hai hum
waqth ke sath hai sadiyo thak thanhai ka safar
kis ko malum kaha ke hai kidhar ke hai hum
chalte rehte hai ke chalna hai musafir ka naseeb
sauchte rehte hai kis rehguzar ke hai hum
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #1 on: December 20, 2008, 05:43:02 PM »
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Nice one Satya JI
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Satya.patel
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«Reply #2 on: December 20, 2008, 06:23:21 PM »
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housla afzaai ke liye bahut bahut shukriya rajesh bhai...
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #3 on: December 22, 2008, 06:29:42 AM »
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niceone satya ji
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #4 on: December 22, 2008, 10:42:43 AM »
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apni marzi se kaha apne safar ke hai hum
rukh hawao ka jidhar ka hai udhar ke hai hum
pehle har cheez thi apni magar ab lagta hai
apne hi ghar mein jese dusre ghar ke hai hum
waqth ke sath hai sadiyo thak thanhai ka safar
kis ko malum kaha ke hai kidhar ke hai hum
chalte rehte hai ke chalna hai musafir ka naseeb
sauchte rehte hai kis rehguzar ke hai hum

Satya ji!
Aapkey yeh chaar asha'ar hi mainey padhhey hain! Khaasa achchha likhteen hain aap!
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #5 on: December 22, 2008, 02:25:24 PM »
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'Irshaad -Talat azeez' ki aur bhee ghazlon ka collection ho agar aapke paas Satya ji- to ussey bhee sabhi ko rubaru karwaye...khaasi acchi album hein poori.aapka collection vaakai kaabile-taaref hai.
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«Reply #6 on: December 23, 2008, 04:38:32 AM »
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'Irshaad -Talat azeez' ki aur bhee ghazlon ka collection ho agar aapke paas Satya ji- to ussey bhee sabhi ko rubaru karwaye...khaasi acchi album hein poori.aapka collection vaakai kaabile-taaref hai.
Satya ji!
Aap jab bhi kisee doosrey ki gazal/nazm/rubaayi/qatah/asha'ar post kareyn, to, NM (NOT MINE) likhnaa na bhooleyn! Please clarify your position!
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gurinder
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«Reply #7 on: December 29, 2008, 10:07:51 PM »
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bahut sunder keep it up
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: December 29, 2008, 10:09:00 PM »
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apni marzi se kaha apne safar ke hai hum
rukh hawao ka jidhar ka hai udhar ke hai hum
pehle har cheez thi apni magar ab lagta hai
apne hi ghar mein jese dusre ghar ke hai hum
waqth ke sath hai sadiyo thak thanhai ka safar
kis ko malum kaha ke hai kidhar ke hai hum
chalte rehte hai ke chalna hai musafir ka naseeb
sauchte rehte hai kis rehguzar ke hai hum


Nice SHARING satya ji
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