Aaj Rootha hua ek dost bahut yaad aaya

by -Kashish- on January 08, 2010, 10:33:32 AM
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«Reply #15 on: January 13, 2010, 10:36:42 AM »
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bahot acha likha hai Kashish ji

dosti me yun to roothna manana hai hota
dosti me magar roothna manana nahi hota

Shukriya Kaash ji
nice lines from ur side too
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«Reply #16 on: January 13, 2010, 10:38:33 AM »
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Aakhir Hum Bhi Jaan Na Chahenge Gudiya
Aisa Aapka Kaunsa Dost Hai Jo Ab Tak
Humse Anjaan Hai...!!!
Khair

Aapne Haal e Dil Ko Bakhubi
Shabdon Mein Piroya Hai Good Job

Khush Raho...


bahut bahut shukriya Majid Bhai notworthy
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«Reply #17 on: January 17, 2010, 03:53:28 PM »
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Doston, aaj mujhe ek dost ki bahut yaad aa rahi hai jo mujhse naraaz ho gaya hai
galti shayad meri hi hai ...
is nazm ke zariye usse kehna chahti hoon ki uski dosti bahut khaas hai mere liye
shayad woh laut aaye mere paas.......


Aaj Rootha hua ik dost bahut yaad aaya
Achcha guzra hua kuch waqt bahut yaad aaya

Jo har lamha meri salaamati ki dua karta tha
aaj ek thokar lagi to bahut yaad aaya

Meri khushi mein apni khushi talaashta tha jo
aaj yeh ek hasi par woh bahut yaad aaya

Ek ashk se mere jaise thehar jaati thi uski duniya
aaj ek aansoo aankh mein aaya to woh bahut yaad aaya

Jise is dil ke kareeb paaya itna
aaj kuch door gaya to bahut yaad aaya

Mere wajood se hi mehak uth_ti thi duniya uski
aaj ek phool khila to woh bahut yaad aaya

Har mushkil mein jo saath tha mere saaya bankar
aaj dil zara pareshaan hua to woh bahut yaad aaya

Zindagi ki dhoop mein jo jalta tha yeh badan
aaj jab ise barsaat ne chua to woh bahut yaad aaya

Aaj Rootha hua ik dost bahut yaad aaya
Achcha guzra hua kuch waqt bahut yaad aaya........



Apne Dost Ki Yaad Me Behad Jazzbaati Alfaaz Likhe Hain aapne Kashish.. Agar Wo Aapka Khaas Dost Hai to Kabhi aapse Door Ja hi Nahi sakta..!!

Aur Mujhe Poori Ummed Hai Ab Tak Shayad wo Laut Aaya Hoga..!! Jis Dost Ko aap Itni Shiddat Se chaahti Hain.. Aakhir Wo aapse Zyada Din Door Raha Bhi Kaise sakta hai..!!  icon_thumleft

Ummid Hai Wo Laut aaya Hoga..!!



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«Reply #18 on: August 19, 2010, 12:36:37 PM »
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Doston, aaj mujhe ek dost ki bahut yaad aa rahi hai jo mujhse naraaz ho gaya hai
galti shayad meri hi hai ...
is nazm ke zariye usse kehna chahti hoon ki uski dosti bahut khaas hai mere liye
shayad woh laut aaye mere paas.......


Aaj Rootha hua ik dost bahut yaad aaya
Achcha guzra hua kuch waqt bahut yaad aaya

Jo har lamha meri salaamati ki dua karta tha
aaj ek thokar lagi to bahut yaad aaya

Meri khushi mein apni khushi talaashta tha jo
aaj yeh ek hasi par woh bahut yaad aaya

Ek ashk se mere jaise thehar jaati thi uski duniya
aaj ek aansoo aankh mein aaya to woh bahut yaad aaya

Jise is dil ke kareeb paaya itna
aaj kuch door gaya to bahut yaad aaya

Mere wajood se hi mehak uth_ti thi duniya uski
aaj ek phool khila to woh bahut yaad aaya

Har mushkil mein jo saath tha mere saaya bankar
aaj dil zara pareshaan hua to woh bahut yaad aaya

Zindagi ki dhoop mein jo jalta tha yeh badan
aaj jab ise barsaat ne chua to woh bahut yaad aaya

Aaj Rootha hua ik dost bahut yaad aaya
Achcha guzra hua kuch waqt bahut yaad aaya........


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«Reply #19 on: August 19, 2010, 12:46:08 PM »
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Bahut khoob Kashish ji... bahut hi pyaara likha hai aapne.. aapki ye kavita hamaare dil ko gehraiyon tak chhoo gayi... bahut bahut khoob .... par ek shukayat bhi hai meri aapse aur aap jaise kuch members se... itna achcha likhte hain aap log aur YO me dikhaayi bhi nahi dete... aap nahi chahte ki aapki itni pyaari pyaari kavitaayen hum padhe aur unka aanand le...

yunhi likhte raha kijiye aur YO me regular aate raha kijiye... bahut khoob likhte hain aap... really it's too good...!!!


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