AISE NAHIN WAISE (Rubai)... "MohaN"

by surindarn on February 25, 2019, 11:23:55 PM
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AISE NAHIN WAISE

Tu aise nahin waise hee kar
Yeh naseehat sahib khudko hee kar
Gar naseehat kisee aur ko karnaa chaaho
MohaN to phir behtar hogaa ke iltejah hee kar


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«Reply #1 on: February 26, 2019, 11:10:26 PM »
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AISE NAHIN WAISE

Tu aise nahin waise hee kar
Yeh naseehat sahib khudko hee kar
Gar naseehat kisee aur ko karnaa chaaho
MohaN to phir behtar hogaa ke iltejah hee kar


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«Reply #2 on: February 27, 2019, 10:23:50 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: March 01, 2019, 11:34:09 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: March 03, 2019, 03:16:57 AM »
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Sorry Sir ye Rubai nahi hai - 4 lines likhen to behtar hoga...
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Sorry Sir ye Rubai nahi hai - 4 lines likhen to behtar hoga...
Shukria for the correction.
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«Reply #7 on: March 03, 2019, 11:24:36 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: March 04, 2019, 09:46:00 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: March 05, 2019, 11:29:37 PM »
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Bahut shukria all readers.
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