de do jitani saja deni ho mujhako...

by Akant on August 11, 2004, 06:58:49 AM
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kai baar tumhe likha tha
phir message bhi kiya tha
per tum ab bhi ho naraj
na deti ho koi javab

kuchh to bata do
meri khata kya hai
kya bhul gaya tha main
tumhara janm din
ya kuchh ker baitha hoon
up-sakun

yah sach hai
ki vyast bhi main rahta hoon
bhul bhi ho sakti hai
ek hujum ko sath liye chalta hoon

per agar tum na dogi sath
dosti se uthata rahega biswas

aa jao aur bol do
meri galtiyo ke bag khol do
de do jitani saja deni ho mujhako
per khud se ruthana chhod do



Akant...
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nishita
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«Reply #1 on: August 11, 2004, 07:01:11 AM »
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Wo sila mila hai mujhko teri dosti ke peeche
ke hazaaron gum lage hai..mere zindagi ke peeche..
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«Reply #2 on: August 11, 2004, 10:52:06 AM »
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Quote from: "nishita"
Wo sila mila hai mujhko teri dosti ke peeche
ke hazaaron gum lage hai..mere zindagi ke peeche..


Nishita ji,

welcome on my page..
aapne bahut achchha sher likha hai...
pasand aaya aapka javab..



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«Reply #3 on: August 11, 2004, 12:04:42 PM »
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Wo sila mila hai mujhko teri dosti ke peeche
ke hazaaron gum lage hai..mere zindagi ke peeche..

kya khoob kehte hain galib,
in ankohon mein aansu latey hain zalim....
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nishita
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«Reply #4 on: August 11, 2004, 12:31:27 PM »
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mera sher nahi hai janaab... mere frd ne diya hai @akant
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hi
«Reply #5 on: August 12, 2004, 07:32:45 AM »
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Sanju ji,

aapane apana vichar vyakt kiya abhari hoon aapka..
aate rahiyega..



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hi
«Reply #6 on: August 12, 2004, 07:35:33 AM »
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mera sher nahi hai janaab... mere frd ne diya hai @akant


Nishita ji,

jee achchha.. aapke friend ne diya hai..
tab to bahut achchhe aapke friend honge..



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nirali_&_love
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«Reply #7 on: August 21, 2004, 10:54:32 PM »
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i really like ur sayri
nice one
nirali
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