Dil Udaas Hai......!!

by Talat on May 05, 2009, 07:06:29 PM
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«Reply #30 on: May 13, 2009, 06:41:17 PM »
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Quote from: salma786 on May 11, 2009, 06:01:05 AM
Bahoot bahoot khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Dosti ke maayne ko jante hai hum,
Kon hai yaha begana pehchaante hai hum,
Mana kuch khata huyi hai hum se ae-dost,
Par saare zamane me tujhe hi apna maante hai hum!

Thanks dear Salma....Nice lines by you too  icon_thumleft Thanks Usual Smile
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«Reply #31 on: May 13, 2009, 06:43:47 PM »
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Quote from: Bharat on May 12, 2009, 05:35:03 PM
Hello Talat,
Bohot bohot hi achcha likha hai !!!  very very impressive...

It is a long poem and normally you do not right too many long poems.
(something different from you)

It is a good thing that you cleared as this is not for one of your
friends. Before I read that, I thought it is for me.

Khwaish, Kaash & Sarvesh,
Very good replies from all of you...

Thanks so much Bharat


Yeah..I write long poems not very often...I tend to loose patience  tongue3 tongue3

Please don't ever think I can do that to you...You are one of my best friends and will always be   icon_flower
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«Reply #32 on: May 14, 2009, 01:22:01 AM »
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Salma,

Very nice lines.....

Talat,
You are welcome !!!
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«Reply #33 on: May 26, 2009, 12:02:03 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 06, 2009, 05:29:23 PM
Bahut accha likha hai dear Talat.... Last para toh bahut sahi aur accha likha aapne. Daad hazir hai dear

Thanks a lot Roja dear
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«Reply #34 on: June 02, 2009, 02:03:39 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 05, 2009, 07:06:29 PM
Shayad kuch rishte itne mazboot nahin the.....Shayad hum hi bharam main jee rahe the !!!




Dear Talat, na jane aaj fir aapka yeh kalam padne ko dil kiya. aur aapka likha,
yeh line padkar sach mein laga k hum veham mein jee rahe hai..sad7
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"Shayad kuch rishte itne mazboot nahin the.....Shayad hum hi bharam main jee rahe the !!!"
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«Reply #35 on: June 02, 2009, 02:11:46 PM »
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Mandir tumhare pyar ka dil mein bana liya
Jab chaha apni lagan ka deepak jala liya

Sooni padi muddat se thi basthi mere dil ki
Tum aa gaye toh tumne apna ghar bana liya

Apne hamare meherba.n honge na hum pe kyu?
Humne toh dushmanon ko bhi apna bana liya

Ahele-wafa (premigan) ke darmiya.n jagda nahi hote
Chale apni-apni raah aur manzil ko paa liya

Hai Ishq ebadat, isse samja na zamana
Vehmo-gumane-akkal (buddi ki shankayein) ne sab kuch gava liya

Phool khushi se aaj samate nahi raqeeb
Dera "Roja" ne teri gali se uta liya
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«Reply #36 on: June 06, 2009, 09:29:06 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on June 02, 2009, 02:03:39 PM

Dear Talat, na jane aaj fir aapka yeh kalam padne ko dil kiya. aur aapka likha,
yeh line padkar sach mein laga k hum veham mein jee rahe hai..sad7




Ek baar phir is nazm ko padhne ka bohot shukriya Roja.....waise bharam se nikalna bhi achchi ho hota hai.
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«Reply #37 on: August 01, 2009, 07:51:10 AM »
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Sari umar ankho me ek sapna yaad raha,
Sadiyan beet gayi jisme wo lamha yaad raha,
Na jane kya baat thi unme,
Sari mehfil bhul gaye bus wo hi ek chahra yaad raha.
-Yogit (yyadav@alec.ae)
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«Reply #38 on: August 01, 2009, 07:52:58 AM »
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Hausle Zindagi Ke Dekhte hai.. Chalo Kuch roz Jee ke Dekhte hai... Baarishon Se to Pyas buzhtee nahin... Aao Ab Zeher Pee ke Dekhte Hain....

Unse roz milne ko DIL CHAHTA HAI
Kuchh sunne sunane ko DIL CHAHTA HAI
Tha kisi ke MANANE KA ANDAJ aisa.
Ki phir RUTH jane ko DIL CHAHTA HAI
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